I was so happy to see the new update! Thank you for the incredible storytelling. I love the character development, especially for Bella as she has found her strength and unique talents. I keep thinking about how she'll be the "tipping point" for the upcoming supernatural war. The suspense is killing me! Thanks again, wonderful work. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This story has so much supernatural stuff going on its crazy! I can't wait for more!

Congratulations and Welcome Back...Great Update

Welcome back! I was just thinking about this story. I wonder what Eddie is up to since Alice can't see him could he be close to the wolves. I really love the way you have written Paul's character. Thank you so much for taking the time to update with your busy schedule! I am hoping you get some sleep soon;) Loved it!

Welcome back! Real life has its demands and we understand. This is very good. I think things are about to happen very quickly for the Pack and for Bella and Jacob. Jacob is impressive. I hope Sam holds it together, he has to let Leah go. I'm glad Rosalie is watching out for Edward since he is making himself a threat.

Best wishes! Looking forward to the rest.

i always wondered why a lot of writers give Bela rhe ability to alpha order the pack. One of the reason for alpha orders is so the pack cannot disobey the alpha. by having two people ability to give the order it can easily counter the other. yes, they are alpha pairs but there still need to be happened if jacob ordered paul to stay with bella and then bella ordered him to not follow her? will it erased the effect of jacob's order even though it for her safety? if she got hurt because of it who is to blame. some writer even wrote bella the ability to alpha order jacob which dispel his position as the alpha. how can he be the alpha when he can be ordered around by someone else. i think you need to clear the parameters of bella's ability to alpha order the pack.
all in all, i really do love the story. keep it coming please...

Wow! What incredible writing and storytelling. I absolutely love what you've done with Bella's character, she has so much depth and strength. I'm dying to know what happens next!

Is it just me, or does it seem like everything happens to fanfiction authors? Story is amazing so far.

I discovered your story a few days ago and really hope you'll continue. You have a knack for writing! I like how you've brought your own characters into the mix and I love the whole Paul-Jen scenario. Almost more than Bella and Jake. ;) But Bella's hidden powers are terribly fascinating. I'm always intrigued by stories that feature her shield or something else of her own.

Please update!

Please continue writing about this story please? I love it already!

Will Bella and Jacob be alright?

I hope Bella and Jacob get thei please with kids and a family of their own please?

So is Bella safe from the venom. now? And is she a wolf as well as a witch? Will she and Jacob get thei and a family of their own please?

I hope old quil and Jen can save Bella in time please for Jacob please?

Can they fix Bella and Jen and Paul?