You should continue this. I know it’s been more than a decade. But you should consider it. It’s a really nice story!

wow great story! I just read all of it in one sitting, blach its almost 2am now! This is honestly such an interesting story! I'm really curious as to know whats up with Seraph! He's hot, he's cold, what the heck is he? Then Ed's random rescue! Gotta say, I loved that! She was missing for so long i thought she was going to be completely absent from the story but then she reappears just in time! Great! Well update soon! I'm hooked!

Wow, this is a great fic! And the car chase was excellent too!

Update sometime soon!

~bored2death

Oops... I read this a while ago but didn't leave a review. Now that I've read it again I'll give one.

This chapter was as enjoyable a read now as it was the first time around. Few people seem to be able to write action well and have it flow smoothly, but you pull it off wonderfully. This was one hell of a chapter, definitely glad you got the story to this point and that you were able to create an interesting plot around it. Can't wait to read more.

Oops... I read this a while ago but didn't leave a review. Now that I've read it again I'll give one.

This chapter was as enjoyable a read now as it was the first time around. Few people seem to be able to write action well and have it flow smoothly, but you pull it off wonderfully. This was one hell of a chapter, definitely glad you got the story to this point and that you were able to create an interesting plot around it. Can't wait to read more.

it was an awesome car chase!way kool you have to do more of that update soon!

Very nice story, believable plot.

I liked on how well you write the characters.

*laughs* wow, a whole story just for a chaswe scene...in Bebop, you coulda put one anywhere! Well its a great story regardless and I want more soon,please!

Wah, no, continue soon or I'll...I'll...break your pinky finger! Lol. Yeah well...get another chapter in here soon!

Dear sweet jesus, you're not dead!

Coulda fooled me for nine months or so ;)

Great to see you back and updating, yet another interesting, if mildly predictable twist. Keep the good work coming and we'll keep reading, no matter HOW long it takes to churn out updates. We readers understand the demands of the real world, so no rush, as long as you don't abandon us forever its all gravy!

nice job ) keep up the good work, and update soon

yay! an update! keep it up!

I haven't read the story yet, but I am, right after I finish typing this review. Have you noticed that the month that you published and updated are the same months? Or that the dates and years are 2 more or less than each other? For example: September 2, 2002 and September 4, 2004.

Notice the two's and four's. Is this too random? ;

holy crap...i just had that EXACT same idea of this story to write! that her older brother was alive and everything! Oh no, now i'm gonna feel kinda weird writing a story that someone else has already written.

Although we had the same idea, that her brother was a live. i have a different plot to it. Hm, I'll go ahead and write the fic and post it anyway. I will write the fic yes, but will have a totally diferent plot. because you see, i have made up the plot for my fic about two weeks before i read this fic of yours now. and i refuse to copy someone else's wonderful fic and make it my own.

And so, i shall write the fic.

Maybe you could read it and tell me what you think, ok? And keep up with the awesome fics that you write so well!

little-sango