Reviews for Betrayed |
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Guest chapter 7 . 7/7/2018 This story is horrible |
DoomMarine55 chapter 1 . 7/7/2017 I'm glad you don't own fairy tail because you're a shit writer. |
Rubybird2329 chapter 8 . 4/24/2017 I hate you for discontinuing this story. Period. |
lolitagirl.2015b chapter 1 . 11/8/2016 FUCK YOU LISANNA! |
Johnny Spectre chapter 7 . 8/2/2016 It feels like you're jumping around a bit too much |
Windforce27 chapter 7 . 5/11/2016 Great story can't wait for Nalu or til Lucy meets fairy tail or fairy tail find out they are competing against Lucy! It's quite confusing and the whole bit with the Mirror kinda lost me, but yeah I love this story and I'm hooked! Hate Lisanna though! For someone so nice in the anime and mirajane's sister... What a bitch! Anyways great read and please update soon! |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/1/2015 AWESOME |
jfkkennedy chapter 1 . 9/3/2015 Lisanna S class that has got be a joke? No way a cat, bird, penguin, fish, or any other animal take over has any real power. Just the thought of her S class makes me not want to read this story. Natsu is too dumb to be S class I guarantee he will die on a mission, with his reckless not planning or thinking ahead in battles... |
crossover 562 chapter 7 . 9/2/2015 Um great story but way too confusing |
crossover 562 chapter 6 . 9/2/2015 Ummm.l am not hooked sorry |
techTyrant24 chapter 7 . 4/25/2015 you should update :3 |
confused chapter 7 . 4/14/2015 ooookkkkaaaayyyy!? I am super confused! But can't wait till fairy tail sees Lucy |
Louilovex chapter 3 . 2/22/2015 Aww lovely ending looking forward to post another fan fiction Video on YouTube you have a amazing talent |
Renae-Bookworm chapter 5 . 2/16/2015 Is Haru, Haru Glory from Rave Master? |
Confuse chapter 7 . 1/27/2015 This is really confusing like who is it that Six, Ten and those people are after and want to kill, is it Lucy or Inori or I don't know. Like who really is the main character here, I'm so confuse, hope I get to understand this more in your upcoming chapters! 0_0 |