Wow.

This was amazing to read! Keep up the great work :)

Your thoughts are so pure, and mature. It is not at all depressing, believe me.
Loved your story though

This brought me to tears it was so true but also so sad

1. Excellent story! You capture dialogue really well! Many authors don't do it very well, but you did a great job! Also, I really liked how you developed Anna Beth! It wasn't just a immediate transition. It was slow. Well done
2. I'm sorry to hear about your mom doing this stuff to you. That sounds like it really sucks. I hope it all works out! Your writing is amazing, and I hope she is talking from a place of frustration and not speaking honestly.
God bless!

This is one of the best stories I've read on fanfiction. The way you've portrayed Annabeth is just beautiful. This isn't one of your best? I beg to differ... Please do keep writing, for even if others don't see it, you have an amazing talent!

it was so beautiful i literally cried

If this wasn't your best work, I can't believe what is. This story is just...awesome. Some of the parts, I was actually crying. I loved reading this! I think you're a great author. :)

The feels in this story . . . Even though the good ending happened a while ago, I'm still crying. If this isn't your best work, I need to read what you DO consider your best.

Your story was amazing... I especially loved the arguments between Annabeth and her dad - the birthday, and susan... Keep up the good work

Loved it!

OHMYGOD THIS WAS SOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!

(Take my word for it when I'm saying this was GOOD because I never, ever, EVER review like a crazy head-over-heels fangirl)

Let me say something: this was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. This was posted last year, and I'm sorry to say I've just started reading your stories yesterday, (Although, I've already finished "Cinderella"), but I love them! Especially all your creative ideas. This one in particular is probably my favorite, even though it makes me cry. And, if writing is your dream, you should follow it! (Like that cliche quote where your follow your dreams:)) Writing is a way for escape, for me. If I ever feel bad I create an imaginary world where everything is perfect and I can be me. Luckily, I don't have family problems, but I used to get bullied so, I also wanted to say that I really appreciated your story, "Good-bye." So, just wanted to say, that you're an amazing writer, and I would totally love to see any of your own original works! (I'm voting in the poll.) Don't give up on writing!

That was amazing. I am full on crying and I have only cried two other times, the end of allegiant, and another fanfiction similar to yours. Keep up the good work!

I cried and I still am wow this was great!