This. Was. So. Amazing! I absolutely loved it. Especially, how the relationship between Will and Hannibal was woven so as to not appear as unequal in the later years as it was in the early ones! And I just loved Mama! Alana. I've never really seen that before. Just keep writing for all our sakes!

It's unedifying. writing style isn't problem, but charakter creation makes me cringe. how old are they...? you wrote them like kids. odd problemy, silly behavior... And Alana's POV doesn't contribute anything. at least at this point of story. i 'm not going to check, if this gets better.

the dynamics of this are really odd? i don't know what to say. i think will seems really young in this despite his age. this is really well written but i just can't get into it.

love love love
:).

I always wanted to read a high school AU about these two, so glad that I did.

...Dr. Lecter...is he a doctor in this story? Also, is Dr. Bloom a doctor, or did you forget? When I went to high school we only had Mr./Mrs., but we didn't have the best teachers.

That is one sweet ending :) somehow i imagined will would get to know about his husbsnd's work, but hey, everyone's imagination's different :) thanks for the nice story!

Nice how their relationship evolved until they became equals... Well done! Did u ever consider working on this fic to transform into original work to publish it? :)

Loooooooollll Will the Cannibal

The comment about bombs dropping around dear zen Hannibal was hilarious. Finally coming back to finish reading your fic after last night. Yeeeee :)

That is just sooooo cute *hannibal cocoon* drolls

Wow, unexpected to say the least... Well done, surprise is never bad!

You are such a takented author! I love hiw the relationship between Will and Hannibal evolves so smoothly. How H manages not to go oc and still like W, how artistic you just described this torture scene... Very well played!

The affectionate pettong was really sweet 3
I think you forgot to make Dr Bloom say something on her first intervention with Will :)

I really liked this story though I have to admit I wasn't fan of the daughter idea. Kind of ruined it for me. But I tend to have something against children so don't bother taking my opinion on that in account. If you ever were going to that is...This is why I never write reviews,I'm so bad at doing them. But great job with the story.