| Reviews for Chronic |
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Guest chapter 28 . 5/5/2018 Now you just need to rebuild that following. I suggest necromancy. Skeleton minions can't get mad about new chapters when you control them. |
Guest chapter 30 . 5/3/2018 Holy crap. Holy shit. You're alive. |
Lost chapter 27 . 1/21/2015 My interest died with the POV change I find myself utterly uninterested in the others. |
Lori Konosuna chapter 2 . 1/10/2015 This story is excellently written. The plot is unique and rather exciting...This is the Fire Emblem fanfic I've been dreaming of! |
Lazarian chapter 29 . 1/10/2015 Found this story today and I really liked this SI in the beginning. Not so much the constant changing POVs though. Often, I couldn't figure out who's POV it was until near the end of the chapter. Sometimes, not even then. It'd be more helpful if the chapters were labeled with who's POV it was. Either that or reconstruct the beginning where the speaker is called by name by another character, as long as the speaker's identity is made clear. |
Nephi136 chapter 12 . 9/26/2014 Saw this coming the moment they were made roommates. Seems to be the pattern with self-inserts: the person set up as a potential close friend of the insert will die. |
Avatar.NIX chapter 27 . 9/23/2014 Ah, so that's what happened during the fight against Gangrel! ...huh. Well, I guess this is an explanation as to how you can recruit the Mad King? (Honestly, I've never recruited him before, haha.) And, damn, you killed off my favorite cavalier. *sniffle* Poor Stahl... ; n ; *smh* In any case, it could be me, but it feels like Ena's introspecting more than observing? Then again, I could be wrong. (Wouldn't be the first time, actually.) Regardless, it's good to read more, so good luck with everything and until next time then! ;3 |
Avatar.NIX chapter 26 . 6/24/2014 Ah, I finally got around to reading this (though maybe I should've waited until after my headache's gone... Nah, too good of a chance to pass up)! Anyway, the mood's flipped since the previous chapter: it's much more lighthearted, thank goodness. I totally need a sprinkle of happiness right now... And it looks like Emmeryn did end up surviving. Wow, um, I wonder what happened? Still haven't re-read everything so I've forgotten a lot of what had happened... Oh well, it might pop up again later? Not sure what else to add, so I'll end this here with a "nicely done". Until next time then! P.S. Thank you for clarifying whose POV this is. I really appreciate it. |
LeonPianta chapter 26 . 5/31/2014 Ah you're probably at Fanime right now! Hope you're having a good time I still am wondering what the fall at the courtyard is? Is someone dead? I'm v v confused I'm also RLY glad Emmeryn's alive because I love her Whoa I'm finally caught up! Amazing. I'll look forward to the next one! -Don |
LeonPianta chapter 25 . 5/31/2014 The confusion does not stop :P I am curious as to why Ena keeps referring to the assassination attempts as the "fall" like? Did someone die? Confusion Also sorry to nitpick but in your list of new recruits you forgot Cherche? I am laughin about Libra's description though Sad to see the Shepherds aren't all that close. At least Gregor-sama and Nowi and Tharja are all in a group? I love them But yeah I am worried someone's totally dead and idk who. I am also worried for Chalys and am wondering what everyone but Chrobin is calling her? Woo -Don |
LeonPianta chapter 24 . 5/30/2014 WOW am I confused. I think I understand each part of his history but not really how they all lead to each other? Like. Is the last part the current timeline or a prior one (eighth I think?)? Why did Joshua become all anti-Chalys? And what the what did he kill them and then not what? Why timelines Do you like Homestuck because I'm getting that vibe. Alas, I love it. The chap, that is. WOW Joshua stuff! Nice -Don |
LeonPianta chapter 23 . 5/30/2014 Like Chalys, I have no idea who the PoV character is for this chapter omg. My only guess is Ena? ? But her way of mentioning Joshua struck me as odd for Ena... Who knows But oh goodness I wonder what is up with my poor child (read: Chalys). Hopefully it's nothing permanent? Zetsubou -Don |
LeonPianta chapter 22 . 5/29/2014 Whoazers! Ena come into my arms you need the biggest hug evEr? My baby Dang I really am curious about The Joshua Deviation! I am looking forward to the -Don |
LeonPianta chapter 21 . 5/29/2014 I am confused .-. But I usually am. Heck yeah to Robin for her keen eye though. Marth omg bab -Don |
LeonPianta chapter 20 . 5/29/2014 Robin's drastic response seems a bit out of place to me. Is she saying it like now at midnight while they're on watch? Or is Chalys just remembering her saying it before. Also what's with Robin's command to move away from the ledge what Tbh I kinda would have liked to hear Ena's description of alterJoshua but. I guess I can imagine :p Another interesting chap! Glad to see Ena and Chalys talking. (Maybe I ship it? *shot*) -Don |