Awesome story! Hope it will continue!

This is a very dark evil Harry Potter. It’s well written and moves quickly.

Two critiques. First, the relationship between a 20 year old Harry and a 14 year old Gabbie is creepy. Harry should have spent a few more years in Azkaban or training before contacting Gabbie to get past it.

Second, I like the idea of freeing Grindelwald. But shouldn’t they actually train for 5 years, as planned? Gabbie is only a 4th year. Harry’s education is spotty. 5 years as planned could be covered in a short paragraph. It would make his knowledge more believable, even though he already has the power.

Update soon please.

Great story love the original concept I hope you find your way back to it I'd love to see where you take it from here thanks for sharing

Unfortunate this ended. Enjoyed the story

Umm all Gabrielle should've done was told her she was going with Harry nothing else. Anything else would hold her Mom legally liable and all sorts of shit will likely happen.

Riiiiiiiiiiight. So let's not be guilty by making yourself MORE guilty!

All I will say is do unto others what you would want done to yourself.

Only thing I don't like is how it says the ministry claimed his vaults, the goblins are greedy they wouldn't let the ministry take the money because then they would lose the money and the ministry has no control over Gringotts

I kind of doubt Evil Harry would use the killing curse and besides it's kind of boring

Great read so far! Looking forward to your next installment.

But a 7-year-old would be misguided by their parents and be just as 'trapped' as Tracey Davis would have been. A 7-year-old just listens to their parents and emulated them. Without the parents there anymore, it wouldn't be hard to correct that, the child is still innocent and their beliefs aren't set in stone by any means at that point.

Harry's reasoning for killing the innocent children was lacking substance was devoid of any sort of intelligent logic. They are innocent regardless of gender at that age and this unnecessary to kill. It doesn't matter if they weren't tortured, the fact that they will kill already makes him monster enough. He has already broken his vow to himself.. I'll still stay for the Gabrielle fluff tho. She is too adorable to pass up on a small hypocritical issue in Harry's part.

I thought Harryvwadnt going to turn into a monster? I thought he would kill only those who truly deserve it? How is a 7-year-old with killing?

Oh please keep writing this fanfic I think it’s great and extremely well written. I just found it yesterday and I couldn’t stop reading it. I really like it’s a HP/GD pairing and you did a really good job at not only having Harry go dark but showing the reason for him to go dark. Also great idea for the immortality part and I like that even with Harry being dark he still has love and compassion in him.