What will happen next?

Uh- well, if you still continuing this then nevermind, but could you consider reposting the older version, so we know what'll happen?

Will there be any more? Been a while... Thanks for all your hard work, interesting so far.

I'm... kind of confused but also intrigued?

This sounds really cool! I hope u update

Just reread this and enjoyed it so much. I love the thought you put into each character's motivations. Thank you for writing and sharing, I can't wait to read more!

This is really interesting so far!

"Summi" - "Sunmi"

Yes, I know about old-style Hepburn. No, you really shouldn't use it, not even for this. (Although you may want to reconsider the name anyway, because that really looks more Korean than Japanese.)

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I understand that she's being influenced by her past life, but why is she hallucinating so much? She's seeing arms that aren't there.

Awesome! Loving the story! :)

er...I don't understand much of what is happening with your Oc...I'm hoping time will help...

Though it was slightly confusing, the changes in timeline and such don't bother me a bit. Honestly, Naruto has one of the hardest timelines to follow and it's especially hard to write for if you want to stick to it, I've been there. So I'm looking forward to see where your version goes. :) Also I enjoy the baby's point of view, as silly as it seems to say I'm just happy to see her being written like a baby. Sometimes babies in reincarnation stories are written with already formed adult intelligence which I'm able to understand and get behind but really I like seeing that the baby is really a baby as that makes more sense for me in simply a brain development kind of way.

ah promising.

I read this a long time and although I do not remember much, I'm sure I loved and I was sad when you din't continued, so imagine my joy when an upgrade alarm arrived yeaaah! XD, but I have to ask have you changed your kind of writing or someting like that?, is this different from before?, I say this because to tell the truth so far I do not understand, i know that is about a jiraiya's daughter and I know it because I had read before and remember, but it's getting hard to understand the things that happen especially when it comes to the okiya and suzu, when they talk or think I do not understand anything at all, I just hope to clarify with time, thanks for rewriting !