i always thought during his traitorous git stage that Percy belonged in Slytherin instead of Griffendor.
so now he's met his grandsire.

i'm not sure if i want the pink toad dead , but i hate her even more than i did in the book and movie

LOL, i couldn't help but burst out laughing for a few minuets when the elder Malfoy was threatening Alucard.

either Tom's going to be disappointed or turned by a weak younger one.

shiz, Ginny.

ah so he unknowingly sent some of his deatheaters on a suicide mission.
i don't think fledgling Harry will have much to worry about as long as his grand sire doesn't go after his schoolmates

Helicopters weren’t invented until the 1950’s

hey could you please finish this? is that a thing you could do? cause its a good story. just need to tune your spelling up and its perfect

I like the premise but it seems too fast paced, and the general reactions seem really underplayed. Like, Series was shocked, and maybe a little horror stricken, but the real Series would have been throughing up a fit at Dumbledor and Sares, and would have likely broken down. Hermione, and even Pomfrey would have insisted on trying to find a different method, which they would in turn be told there were no other methods that would work in the time they had- they still would have tried though. And "Moody" wouldn't have just out right attacked before knowing the situation. For all he knows, this strange women they none of them have seen before is suddenly accusing him of being a hack. He'd have at least tried to play it off that he was who he said he was and turn suspicion on her, which could in turn insight a pretty good bit of filler where in the two get into a bit of a fight.

As for the fast paced nature, it just seems more like a bunch of talking and less scenery description. It feels as though this is more of the rough draft, just laying the plot out without adding filler.

Don't get me wrong, I'm as much a victim of this type of writing as you, and it takes some time and a lot of rereading to get it right- currently re-writing my own Harry Potter/Hellsing fic because of this very reason.

Now if you're just writing this to get the whole thing out of your head that's completely find, and you don't have to take what I've said to heart. I'm only making this review on your second chapter, so for all I know, you've improved already. I apologize if I've caused offense, as that's not my intent. I just want to help other writers that have potential. And this story does have a good plot! I'd like to see it at it's full potential.

Sears has the same lifespan as Alucard by all accounts the woman is part of his Family.

I also wonder about Harry will he have a pairing because he has a Unlimited lifespan.

You just pulled a Mayuri on her. Nice, couldn't think of a worse fate myself
Please continue

Ok, so you've updated nothing since...2017, I believe, and your Bio said you'd be busy dealing with your new job, though I have no idea when that Bio was written in relation with your story updates.

ANYway, all of that aside, I do hope that you are at least alive and kicking out there, and that you'll eventually be able to come back and continue/finish your stories. Especially this one, since I really want to see where you are/were going to take it.

so..who is the lady.. lets hope that both ginny and harry will be able to be a full vampire..and use their powers to get rif of voldemort n his ilk once and for all..n let alucard and seras deal with the lady..am curious on who is she..update soon..

really? you are making Harry submissive to umbridge, what is wrong with you? other than that, great story

Please update, I love it