This chapter wasn't rushed at all! This was a great chapter and I liked the way you portrayed Simon's frustration through all that's been happening. Keep up the good work!

Great job on this story, I loved reading it!

KEEP WRITE YOU ARE GOOD

I'm actually really glad you stopped this story. I'm not saying I don't like it! Quite the opposite in fact! But if you don't love and believe in your work, then no one else will either, it's best the way you did it!

It was an okay ending, I understand why you do it.

BUT CONGRATULATIONS FOR 400 REVIEWS! HAHA!

Oh wow...I am...speechless

Very Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. Simonette is so adorable.

Loved this chapter. It was a really cute. sisterly bonding one. Most fics are all about the romance and they never think to well, think about the family. THE PACK IS STRENGTH!

Wow, I love this fic! I rarely review fanfictions but I saw you had 396 reviews and thought "hey, I'mma give you 400 XD"

I didn't think it was a crappy chapter. Very sweet and lovey if you ask me. I feel bad for Simon though so close and it was going so well and then Theodore fell.

This story is the reason I'm going to bed nearly 5 hours late and will no doubt warrant a few extra cups of coffee in the morning. For the most part, this was completely adorable and you did an excellent job of presenting from 6 different and unique points of view; I'm impressed! It also goes without saying, but the basics like spelling, grammar, sentence flow, and vocabulary choice were all impeccable. It did become painfully obvious however that you were growing bored / frustrated with the story, so the ending wasn't quite as in-character and felt rather rushed... But I get it; I can't judge when I've done the same... I've got a story that's been on hiatus for over 2 years now. You've at least got an ending, and my sleepy eyes thank you for it, especially when it's 3 chapters shorter than you planned! Just wanted to let you know however that I'll be subscribing just in case you decide to revise the ending... I would love to someday see the ending reflect the same genius as the rest of the story had.

Aww, it's so sad to see this story come to an end! But it's understandable why you wanted to end it, and you shouldn't feel bad about it. Actually, rushed or not, I think you ended the story just fine. I liked how Brittany stepped in at the end.

Anyway, despite what you may think about the story now, I think you should be very proud of it! There were a lot of great moments, everyone was very in-character, and it was really entertaining. Congratulations on ending a wonderful story, and I'm looking forward to what you write in the future!

I don't wan't to sound mean, but I'm GLAD that this story ended, it was starting to get annoying/boring for some reason...yeah...anyway, I'm glad that you finished it instead of abandoning it...aaaand I'm thinking of checking out your other stories too...uhhh...geez, this has got to be the worst review I've ever done...eh, at least I'm paying attention for once

Why did you end it so soon? I'm sad but I guess there's nothing much I can do, hope you continue to write more stories..

Good story just wish it wasn't over
but good story
Theodore and Eleanor finally got together yay

Great job, very well done!
Don't go beating yourself up over the story, it was, by far, THE best story you've ever done here on FanFiction (In my opinion).