Beautiful and amazing. Thank you for not turning this beautiful friendship into slash!

Very nicely done. Sherlock is hilariously true to his character here.

agree: Lestrade is awesome

Poor babies T T

This was great. I'd love to see a story exploring Lestrade, Donovan, Anderson, and the rest of the "drugs squad"'s reaction to seeing 221B clean...

THAT LAST LINE SENT FRIKIN SHIVERS DOWN MY SPINE OH MY GOD IT WAS SO BLOODY BRILLIANT AND NO I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR PUNCTUATIONS BECAUSE OH MY GOD I REREAD IT LIKE 20 TIMES I CAN'T BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW EPIC THIS EPICNESS IS!

The last letter is my favorite. It says everything Sherlock wants to say, concisely and clearly. And I like the phrase "You were brutally honest. I was just brutal." And I like the rest of this story too.

The definition "sometimes offensive" can also apply to Sherlock. Though "often offensive" might be a better description.

This story is so marvelous! And Mrs. Hudson washing Sherlock's mouth out with soap is a nice touch. As are the fluffy bits at the end where they make up.

I"m so glad you decided to expand on this, it's really appreciated.
This story was really heart wrenching and sweet, it was perfect.
Thanks for writing and posting.

awwwwwwwww too adorable when they hugged!

if i could i would especially fav this one chapter .

I know that the Sherlock TV show isn't a very good example, but I felt like there was something off in your profile description. You say you are a Bible believing Christian, but you have had John use the name of Jesus as a swear word fairly often. Perhaps it is in keeping with John's character, but the truth is, I didn't even think you were a Christian until I read your profile. Like I said, the Sherlock TV show is no help in the matter - I had to stop watching that after I realized what I was allowing myself to hear all the time. I probably sound like a hypocrite right now, and maybe I am. Still, I wanted to bring it up to you, since I know you probably want to be able to witness to people who read your stories, and I am assuming you want to honor the One you say you believe in. So just think about it and pray about it, and in the end let God tell you what He thinks - not me. :)

Feel free to delete this review when you're done reading. :)

haha! reboot! very funny

Excellent ending! (sorry I missed the initial post-my email decided to shift everything into my spam folder-so I'm a bit behind the times.) Still, I was thrilled when I found your post!

Thanks for the fun ride-looking forward to "what's next!"
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