This whole story is barely romance. A slow, aching, burn smolders in the background as they both heal.

Then, once the set up is done, you somehow managed to turn that smoldering into an inferno with two chapters. Astounding, truly astounding.

This is a sad story at first and eventually becomes a happy story, but it is a slow burn. Recommended if you like slow relationship stories.

So happy I found this. Such a great read.
I think I’ve read one of your stories before based on some character names and the general plot. Great stuff.

i think you should rewrite the part about romani girls ("gypsy", in case you didn't know, is a derogatory term) because it helps perpetuate stereotypes concerning a minority group.

Man this is a really great story. Keep it going

Youve really nailed down how to write a Grade A bitch of a woman. Throw in lowkey magically roiding out her young student and youve got the full package of 'psycho parent lives vicariously through by forcing their child to excel in competition'. I sincerely hope theres more 'I specialize in killing Dark Lords' Harry in her future.

I was going to say Lunfrey was giving me Cowboys vibes but it looks like toward the last bit his ego isnt big enough to match Jerry lmao.

ehhh you really dragged out the relationship between Gabrielle and Mathieu. I honestly don't see how that would have worked in the real world...

Also, your story didn't address Daphne at all in the ending.

Felt a little underwhelmed.

How can you type that long and not have a brain malfunction.

You need to use more words than "commented. Such as replied, remarked, inquired, noted, etc

I just happened to be re-reading this and now I really would like a hamburger. If only my small city had a Moo-Squick.

Good story.

Nice story!

Great story. Ended a bit suddenly for my tastes, but to each his own I guess. One pet peeve, you always used ‘either’ instead of ‘neither’. Pissed me off every time I read it. But other than that and a few grammar mistakes and typos, it’s great.

This story is absolutely amazing so far, I don't usually read stories like this but I am glad I did. You give the characters a realism that is often missing in most stories and it makes for a believable story.