| Reviews for Of Father and Sons |
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   rosayago65 chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 Great story but to me it seems like Peter is turning his back on Neal though he wants to spend some days with Neal. You're a great writer. |
| puage chapter 1 . 7/6/2013 Very cute story! Loved Peter's dreams with Neal. And the puppy, too. |
| Scarym chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 What a lovely story. Good insight into Peter & Neal. I really like the idea of Neal visiting Peter in his dream and that all Peter had to do was hold Neal's hand in order to wake up. I wish it was longer. Maybe a sequel. : ) Would love to see Neal camping. ; ) |
| govgal chapter 1 . 7/2/2013 I love the plot and how you formatted the dream sequence,and interspersed it between what was really happening, and then pieced it together. I'm really looking forward to more! |
| pechika chapter 1 . 7/2/2013 Loved the description of Peter's nightmare it frighteningly real. Neal helping him get out of the coma and the conversation they had made for delightful read. |
| last1stnding chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 This is a sweet, unique story. I really enjoyed it. |
| kyamei chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Loved this! It took me a while to figure out Peter was dreaming about prison, it was really well done, the interaction with dream-Neal. Great, really great! Also loved that line "You can bring him as long as he has a name" about the dog. I thought that was so cute. |
| anon chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 considering the circumstances, peter may as well have said "Neal, I'm not your father AND I will never turn my back on family." :( this is sweet. its not too much drama and not too little either. good job |
| Laura chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Loved the story.. And Neal should name the puppy Forger-LOL |
| phoebe chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 i didn't get it |
| Wondo chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Clever writing and thought-provoking. After the trauma of S4, Peter and Neal's relationship will have to undergo some changes. I don't believe Peter will be so quick to step out into any gray areas. I'm so curious to see how prison will affect him. Nice to see another fic from Pokeyshadow. :) |
| Stroma chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Very good story. |
| The Italian Temeraire chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Very particular story, anyway, i like it! It is cute, mostly at the end! :) |
| HighOnAWindyHill chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 Aw so sweet! Their relationship is so touching3 Hope everything goes well on the trip! :) Seems like a good opportunity to bond after everything that has happened. Excited for more! |
| Sansoki chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 I feel compelled to write something beyond "Oh, that was so good!" or "Great job". I will say that I enjoyed your take on what may happen in season 5, as it's obvious that Peter and Neal can't simply go back to the way things were; if they ever do, it will take time. I found the last line really resonated with me, for some reason, and I think it was a great way to end the piece. |
