you really captured the epic spirit comic books and cartons try to deliver.

Loved this! I personally also adore x men evolution just that I don't think I'll ever write anything about it:);) batman on the other hand...:D anywho awesome story again!

I really like how you have the whole group getting together to protect one of their own. Great write! )

Haha! Sorry, Director F, but you mess with Laura, you not only mess with her or the Wolverine, but you mess with the entire X-Mansion, as well. And that's a fact! :)

Ha, seems good-ol' Fury wasn't up for any of that Adamantium Knuckle Sandwhich, huh? Or is it that he didn't want it? Well, honestly, who would? :)

I loooove this sweet, lovely one shot! Awesome job!

Not bad, but that huge paragraph where you (dramatically) entered the X-Men had a few run-ons.

Interesting view of the X-men. Good job

I like it! Laura stories are always some of my favorite.

Being wowed was my first reaction. Realizing what situtation you created was even better. I've always interpreted how Laura would make her way into the X-Men (in the last episode), given the fact SHIELD would be hunting her down. I think having people by her side makes it more realistic. Also, your describing of the X-Men standing by her really does warm my heart. Besides that, I think you could make inexplicably great and intense battle scenes. You know, action-junkies like me live off of that stuff.
And yet, you say you're only fourteen! You write so eloquently I didn't believe this was a one-chapter story. Excellent job!

I liked it it was nice I liked how everyone came out and stood together united to protect Laura sweet

i liked it!