Well done story. Too bad it's discontinued. Is anyone going to continue it?

:-)

Poor Tom.

Fabulous-quite a lot of work for the Ministry Obliviators, though.

Nice poetic description of the cold.

Intriguing beginning.

Reminded of "guilty" scene from Superman (1980).

I obviously can't be sure if you got across the point you were trying to, but if it was what I understood from the chapter, I'd say you did a wonderful job.

Yeah! Hey, I'm adding myself to your loong list of reviewers :D
I can see why it's so long, this is awesome :D

Lilith isn't a demon? Whew.

:D stay awesome!

So, it seems Ginny is going to be okay and we've learned at least a bit about Lilith. I do hope the twins are alright, too. I'll be very interested in seeing how Lilith's help effects Harry's fight against Voldemort. Can't wait for your next update!

I may be wrong here, but if I remember correctly, some believe that Lilith was actually the first woman created by God, and after deciding to not marry Adam, became the first demon, thus also being the mother of magic since people believed that magic was born from the offspring of demons.

Lilith, that's Fraisure's wife on Cheers (later ex wife when he got his own show) among other lesser known personalities.

truthfully you hav had better chapters but it was still acceptable anyways

keep on writing
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I read all the chapters without stopping (today I found your story). It's really good! Now I am thinking about the woman who appeared in the previous chapters and who is Lilith, but I dare not hazard a guess. I'm very intrigued about how this story will continue.
Good job!

Well, that was both unexpected and exciting. You have my quite curious who (or what!) your Lilith is? I'm glad both Harry and Ginny have escaped relatively intact and I'll be waiting eagerly for your next update.