Poor Homura. Its suck to be her in this fic

Definitely a more gentle progression compared to the last fic I read that had the protagonist without her powers.

Well well, this is certainly an interesting idea! Definitely not one I've ever seen done before. I particularly enjoy the way everyone is characterized here; it's nice to see Homura get some sympathy for once, even if it doesn't really last, and her struggle to make do without magic to keep everyone alive and relatively safe to the end of the month is something I've never really seen in another fic. The witch fights are well done too; I very much liked the Suleika one, and that was probably the most interesting Charlotte fight I've seen in quite a while. Overall, excellent job, and I hope to see more soon!

Huh. For some reason I never expected Kyuubey to threaten homura. Huh. Gg. Im surprised.

Yknow. I think this homura is the most unhinged I've read about. Well that might be me being tired. Eh whatever awesome story. *Thumbs Up*

"She'd choose the stomach of a Witch any day—at least they could make her feel like she mattered." BUUUUURRRRRNNNNNN.
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...I'm treating this to much like a comment section again arnt I? Eh great chap.

"Do you honestly think I'll let you go?"-i don't know why but I like this line. It's weird. Awesome chap.

ohoho "let me do this" oh boy! That was a perfect way of showing how if Homura acted (even tho she wasn't acting there) just a little bit like a human things would have been easier between her and Sayaka even for a little. Very nice very nice

I'm enjoying this quite a bit, but there is one thing that really bothers me. Kyubey has confirmed that she still has potential as a magical girl, so I have no idea why she hasn't agreed to contract with her wish being that Madoka will never become a magical girl. With enough latent power that she was able to achieve time travel, I'm sure that a simple wish to keep the Incubator from contracting her would be possible. Wouldn't that achieve what she is looking for here? I feel like it would've made more sense given the premise of this story for her to have lost her potential as a magical girl as well.

If I had to guess, I would say no, she can't. But I'm sure that she'll really enjoy trying. And by that, I mean she'll hate it.

Oh m ygod

Im in love with your Hitomi like whoa gimme more bhjgbfdjkfg

Ah your story is wonderful i love every update. Im just glad it updates! sdbhjfd Im going to do to this what i do for another story i love very much

i use ''too good'' which basically means ''this is beyond amazing i have no words to express how much i love it" so..

Your story is too fucking good and i love it to death~ The tension in this fic is just phenomenal! And it just dawned on me ''Yo, what is Kyubey somehow took Homura's SG?" i dont know why he'd do that unless he was aware of the time travel bfhjkgdf speculations!

Man, I love it whenever someone writes about Hitomi. I specially loved how Hitomi and Homura interacted in this chapter! Super funny and they really compliment each other. I'd go as far as to ship both of them together! 3

This is amazing, please continue

Homura could wish for Madoka to forget about that promise AND(probably/hopefully) kill the walper-thingy...and then HAPPY ENDING(totally no suffering) WIth everyone happy!

BOOOM...loop holes?

"WhErEs tHe HapPinIes"