| Reviews for Heart of the Overlord |
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Guest chapter 26 . 8/9 Great chapter |
Jack Redhawke chapter 2 . 8/6 So why and how does sora use a flow motion move to dodge the darkside in chapter one? Like that came out of nowhere, and chapter 2 is riddled with grammar and spelling errors |
Guest chapter 26 . 7/13 Maybe you could you could use the Genie's life force to create more minion after all he's immortal and full of magical powers he should be able to make countless minions before needing to rest up to recharge his energy. |
Blobking chapter 26 . 7/14 which world will sora go next? |
RedGargoyle72 chapter 1 . 7/5 Are you going to add Tiana? |
anonymous chapter 26 . 7/1 Hey H-man, I understand what you're going through. COVID is throwing off everyone's schedules. I do have one question which leads into a suggestion for a future chapter. The question is "When will Sora discover that PJ has turned traitor?" I actually have an idea for PJ's execution, and it involves him taking a dip in some dip. I trust you know what I'm talking about since you have Jessica Rabbit in the harem;). |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/24 I have a question... are you going to add any Warner bros girls to the harem since this isn't pure disney |
Starwing1995 chapter 26 . 6/22 How about the other set of princess are called the princess of darkness after all without darkness their can't be light |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/19 Just make sure that Sora is still a hero by the end of this story and not just the lesser of two evils. |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/18 "What do you mean you sent out orders for our holding to increase their workload dramatically!" Kim Possible yelled at Eilonwy. What does "holding" mean here? |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/17 I am glad that you decided to let the Sultan live. Now next is the Mulan story for Sora to get stronger. By the way what is Sofia up to now after all it has been some time since she found the secret library? |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/17 "What should we do about your last wish?" Aladdin asked. "If I learned anything during this adventure, the Genie's power is too good to let go, but it is also too much of a danger to even think about letting it fall into the hands of anyone else," Sora said. "I'm going to have to get creative. Genie, what would happen if I wish for a lifetime of service?" "An interesting wish. Even though you didn't wish for more wishes, you still get a genie service for the rest of your life. I'm going to have to consult the rule book," the Genie said as he pulled out a big book. "It seems like I technically service you, but my powers and reliability will be drastically reduced. Or, in other words, as long as you live, I will merely have Semi-Phenomenal, Nearly Cosmic Power. And it seems like even if someone else gets the lamp, I will not be able to grant them wishes," the Genie said. So this is what you meant by a more selfish third wish. |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/17 No this is not what I ment for the song. |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/17 Geez things are heating up between Eilonwy and Kim, Sora had better stop those two. |
Guest chapter 26 . 6/17 The Corona virus should have made it easier to update considering we've all been trapped in our houses. By the way you can delete those nuisance reviews now I only posted them to make you update faster and to vent my anger. By the way I was serious when I said that I still hold a grudge for that 91 day wait for a fanfiction that I didn't even like. |