Reviews for CALL OF NINJA: Black Ops
LuBu081 chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
I have been meaning to ask, but what is the Snow Daimo, Koyuki, doing during all of this? She was very friendly with Konoha after Naruto and Team 7 saved her and the country from her evil uncle, and she'd been against fighting, so I'd think she would've been more likely to cut the Snow's ninja village's funding or something. Perhaps that mystery can be solved later with just a simple explanation or a mini-mission? Anyhow, Oboro is reminding me alot of Naruto right now, just he doesn't spam that kage bunshin move so damn much.
LuBu081 chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
Nice character development. Shows even our sometimes infallible OCs make errors in judgement. Also portrays the truth about war, that people die, no matter how crappy it may seem.
The Big Bad Bunny chapter 5 . 7/1/2013
Some one from a Snow Town say "FREEZE"? Well... I-CE what you did there...

It's good.
Greatness Alone chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
Pretty good chapter man, wonder how this fight is going to go.
Zalger248 chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
Wow, looks as though Ryu and Oboro will be in deep either way. Awesome fight scenes, btw. :) Keep it up, Kel!
The Big Bad Bunny chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
Well... you can't win them all... sadly... but If you live... you'll get another shot.

It's good.
Pikpixie03 chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
Wow... someone flailed science in school. But then again, live and learn, right? Man, the locals and Nani are gonna be completely pissed by this. That and Tsunade is gonna be really pissed to replace that gunpowder since it came from Kohona's own stores, right? Even if its not, she's gonna be angry that the mission basically failed. Ah well, life of a ninja.
TheUndyingCrystal chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
Heheheheh...kaboom!
Pikpixie03 chapter 3 . 6/29/2013
I'm so enjoying this right now. :3 Can't wait for next update!
TheUndyingCrystal chapter 3 . 6/29/2013
I like where this going so far :D
The Big Bad Bunny chapter 3 . 6/29/2013
Very Nice Fighting,

It's good.
The Big Bad Bunny chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
Old people... Fucking Old People...

It's good.
The Big Bad Bunny chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Looks like a good Start, I wish you well one it... feels odd for Kel not to be the main man... still...

It's Good.
LuBu081 chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
Pretty good ninja action, but I thought ice release was Hyoton? I have to look this crap up again. Anyway, I wonder what Ryuzo is getting flustered about? I thought he was the heartbreak kid (quite literally)? Anyway, hey, I sent in my bio. I'm quite proud of him. *puffs chest*
Now as for what you could do...
a) pull out some sake and offer him a drink.
b) over your body to him, maybe he's gay and he'll get distracted enough for you to kill him, then you can go clean yourself from having offered yourself to him.
c) I saw this one off of Archer. Take one of the merchants captive, slightly confusing the men. The ice ninja gets angry and threatens to kill the old man in a certain gruesome way, yet while he's saying this, you subtly pressed a kunai against your fake hostage's butt, causing the man to cry out that you've got a boner, causing the ninja to become disgusted with you enough that he isn't paying attention to the old man, then you throw the unseen kunai and thus kill the ninja before explaining that you're 'boner' wasn't that but a kunai. Pretty ingenious, un?
Pikpixie03 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Hmm... This is pretty interesting. I've actually had made a Naruto based character when I was younger. I just never really elaborated on her since that time, I didn't know shit about ninjas. And kinda forgot to fix her up as the series went on... and I've lost touch with Naruto so... many of the rules for it are lost to me. xD

So I'm kinda unsure if I should set her up for this, since I don't remember much of Naruto... Ryuzo is such and asshole but funny. xD Sweet.
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