Ooo, what a lovely idea! Not to mention, perfect for a one-shot. Very nice work.

OOOOOOOOO. I like it.

*frowns* that's just really sad...

Hmmm I noticed a lack of other labyrinth fanfics on your page?

Surely this must be some mistake!

Aww! Dx

Poor Jareth...though that probably wasn't the best way to propose to a teenager...

"This is no friendly love I have for you, Sarah!"

Such a good line! Great job with this piece, I really enjoyed it.

I love the creativity of this story! Nicely written! :)

I like your story, you get the character of Jareth very well.

Now that was interesting... I love it! What a unique idea... Hmm. Wow, really really good idea!

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This is absolutely excellent. So sad but so perfect. -Clare

Very clever! One wonders how it would've backfired on him if she'd pledged to stay with him... then forgot once he took her out!

One tiny quibble. If she could barely stand in the Oubliette, then how is it he was standing and moving with such ease? If he was bending space, you might want to mention it. Stood out to me is all.

Nice use of a "hidden" moment.

Very interesting little interlude.

-Ellie

A very interesting add-on on the Oubliette scene... I loved it! Both characters were extremely well-written,perfectly in-character and such, this was awesome!

Ah. I place of forgetting, I see. Nice idea.

that was freaking amazing! I LOVED IT!