ahhh... y yo estaba algo esperanzada que algo hubiera sido diferente en estos 28 capítulos pero naa.. no cambia nada que alguien mágico que puede prácticamente hacer cualquier cosa cambie algo o mínimo utilizaras la magia de un modo mejor a solo esperar y tratar de no sentirse débil por no hacer nada por dios tantos hechizos que pudieron meter de ves en cuando.
estoy decepcionada y me aburrí un tanto, ojala hubieras mejorado mas cosas y no solo incluir una persona extra.

I think i've hit my limit with this story...
On one hand it's pretty interesting, on the other it's eyeroll inducing on an epic scale.
It seems like every single little thing that happens in this story feels wrong. I'm almost constantly saying 'nah, no way would Potter let that fly' or 'why didn't Potter just...' hell the whole premise of the book feels wrong, as i just can't picture Potter running away from Death Eaters without trying to figure out a way to overcome them.

And even if you just ignore all of that and try to enjoy the story... well...There's too much here that's not actually written by the author. I mean, it's just the whole Vampire Diaries story retold with a few added line tossed in to support adding in Potter. But in the end it's all the same, nothing in the plot has changed.

It's weird how weak she is. I mean you would think she was awesome or something. But so far seems like Bonnie could beat her ass

I’m only up to chapter 2 so I hope my opinion will change as I read but damn do I hate Daisy... like honestly I don’t blame Leya for feeling animosity towards her - hell I still think she’s taking the Daisy thing too well with how she basically abandoned her and is only taking Leya in to assuage her guilt over abandoning the kid when she needed family most. Also, wth does she mean by stuffing Leya into a sch without tutoring her on what she’s missed beforehand? Like dude you abandoning Leya alr showed how horrible of a person you are but forcing your war veteran of a niece into high school when you know that she’s behind in her studies with not bloody support system to speak of and under a completely different curriculum is just cruel and really really idiotic and the actions of someone who thinks they’re smart but they’re not.

Well either way I really do like your writing so far - I just can’t stand Daisy (which may just be my own perspective) but good job! I hope I’ll grow to like her but well, we’ll see

I can’t take this story seriously with the name you’ve given her. What kind of parent would torture their kid with a name like THAT?!

This work is really nice...
Please complete this one...

Wow, that's a twist. Now I can't help but think where Katherine was when Sirius died.
And I'm confused, does Leya have the Elder wand?

I got really interested in the story and had to read it even though I saw the chances of it getting finished are slim. The story so far is great, I hope the author will reconsider writing it again.

Alright, I know that many of us know this already, but the wizarding world lacks in the logic department. How would Leya be safer in the same goddamn country that the death eathers live in, instead of in America, a different continent altogether?!

I always knew that Stefan was angsty, a little emo and the type that likes to brood. But Damon he's the most dramatic Salvatore I've ever seen. If Damon doesn't smarten up, Leya would have no choice but to reveal her magic. I'm thinking she should just use fiendfire or crucio on him. *grins evilly*

Leya is in a town where the supernatural are attracted to or live in, and she hasn't shown them that she's a witch yet she gave Stefan advice on not keeping secrets. Jeez she should follow her own advice. Doesn't matter if it's against the rules to use magic in front of muggles.

Seguila por favor me encanta la trama y quiero ver cuando Leya le cuenta su pasado a Stefan

I keep waiting to see Leya show how powerful she really is. But every opportunity she just comes across as weak and the weariness of war doesn't bleed into her character well. There is so much magic sure could use all the time and it honestly looks like she's kinda incompetent at using magic. So many times she's almost killed and doesn't even defend herself. She doesn't really make any decisions and nobody respects her as a powerful witch. I think her character could have been a lot stronger, a lot more powerful and much more resourceful considering everything that happened in her life in Britain.

You write such good stories I absolutely love leya shes such a unique character and has so many different sides to her. The reveal about Katherine at the end was brilliant and I hope she and leya bond more, Katherine does seem to be kinder towards leya. I hope leya is paired with an original, preferably Elijah or rebekah, I don't see it working with kol and I ship klaroline too much to want leya with Klaus. I hope we see more use of leyas magic I keep thinking that things like leglimency, obliviation and apparation would solve a lot of problems. I also really want leya to take in teddy is love to see everyone's reaction to him and I think having him there would help leya with a lot of her issues about abandonment. I can't wait for more your such a good writer and I love so many of your stories.

KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ