Reviews for For Being Perfect
This Username Is Classified chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
I ACTUALLY CRIED this melted my heart and I crave more but it was a good ending... Ahh the conflicts QwQ
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
aw :)
Mary D. Sue chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
1) Squeeeee! That was so adorable /

2) Am I very much mistaken, or was that a flagrant 'How to Train You Dragon' reference?
Fushicho92 chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
really beautiful *smiles*
general yumi chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
This is so cute! Love it!
SoiArt chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Perfect...just perfect... I think I'm in love... You've made me fall in love with this pairing... *whispers* Thank you...
Melissa Ocana chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
This was one of the most cute stories I have read I love it and let me tell you that you are one of my favorite author actually the first story I read about Marco and Ace was (Rhapsody on a Windy Night) and I loved it, it was kind of sad but I still love it and knowing that this is like the continuation for the story I now love it even more I also wanna read (Bleeding Out) but I can't read it since it's still not complete and that's a problem for me because of two reasons: first because I'm horrible at waiting and even more when there is a cliffhanger, second because I don't like getting to deep in a not finish story because sometimes for some reasons the author does not continue/finish the story and I seriously hate that because it leaves me with an awful feeling so I decided to not take any risks and only read completed stories, but take for sure that ones you're don whit the storry I WILL read it since I really LOVE your stories. In other words don't forget that you also have an outer fan that's waiting for the story continuation until then I'll be waiting :)
pumpkintofu chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
You have the most impeccable and amazing timing ever; I was in desperate need of a nice MarAce fic and I just checked my inbox and... you FLAWLESSLY delivered one like a package straight from heaven and I LOVE you for it (And updates for Bleeding Out! Gotta go check those out!)
Oh the cheesy goodness of this whole one-shot! :D This was so nicely written; simple and short but nonetheless, got me celebrating the beauty and perfection of Marco and Ace that you presented with such artistry and emotion. Nice little plot with Ace's conflict on his relationship with Marco, great description of the setting that you so easily painted in my mind and possibly the greatest ending you can have for a one-shot. I hope you keep them coming and I would like to thank you; for being perfect ! (*worst input of a pun in the history of literature techniques*hehehe)

- Mochi :)
roo17 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Oh, this was just so perfect! :D I always heard that when in a relationship, the 'I love you' sentence sometimes takes a while to be said. Poor Ace. I think I would have been worried too, though. Especially after all the heartbreak he put himself through in Rhapsody on a Windy Night. And then poor Marco, too! He thought Ace wanted to end their relationship! How you described Marco needing Ace to be in his life was so touching too. :)

I love how you described the town and island! It kind of reminded me of Hawaii in some parts. :D And the sunset was downright beautiful! The whole beach scene was so calming, which was awesome seeing as I was having a hectic day. And the water fight! Oh my God, that was just so great. It made me smile and laugh. :D (I can totally see Marco getting involved in a water fight after releasing a ferocious battle cry. XD)

That was so sweet! And grrr you! Because of you, I've actually began to get into… ROMANCE stuff. I've even begun writing a romance MarcoAce story… What have you turned me into?! XD Anyway, I thought this was great! I totally loved it. :D Can't wait to see the collection of prompts in the future! I bet'll be great ;D
Ujvari chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Hey there :D
Its me again!
Nice to read something from you, even if its not a new chapter from Bleeding Out.
But all your stories a great, so I dont really mind XD
And its right to get things of your mind, because other stories flow more after this.
So well get an even better Bleeding Out Chapter :D Ruha!

I like, that this one shot is set in the same universe as Rhapsody.
Its like we got an exclusive excursion in Aces and Marcos life and its naturally for a gay couple to have some struggles on their way.
I wouldnt mind reading more from the experiences theyve made in the one year between Rhapsody and Bleeding.
And I have already two things Id really like to see from you :) No brainstorming needed...

I liked the scene where they were splashing around in the water. It would have been fun, though, if they got to deep and were both immobilized and had drowned XDD
Sorry for that. I couldnt resist.

So here, take a chocolate cookie and a herbal tea for the good work.
And now, shoo shoo, write some more!
Deespiegel chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Awwwww, this was so sweet. Thank you for writing stories of this pairing 3
I just discovered this, I guess I'm going to stalk your account to see your others fics!
Keep writing, you're awesome 333
Anjelle chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Awe XD That was so sappy and gooey and cheesy and adorable! I'm now in a feel-good mood It was a great read after Bleeding Out's recent update - cheered me up! So thanks and I'll definitely check out the collection you plan on writing once Bleeding Out is finished
Kyyhkynen chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Aaaaaahhhhh-
Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh- This was so... So cute and beautiful! Q.Q
When you said 'angst' I was already prepared for something -angstier-, but it's not even close to that! Quite the contrary, it felt so... natural ;u; Ace feeling all nervous and insecure because he needed some reassurance that their feelings were mutual TuT
Also the enDING-! It's exactly as I imgined, did you even read my mind?! They're such dorks, aaaah
And the landscapes descriptions, omg I'm so inspired to paint them now buT I DON'T KNOW HOW TO PAINT BACKGROUNDS- So I'll do my best to learn fast how to paint all those elements you put there! *q*
SO SO SO BEAUTIFUL AND HEART-MELTING AND SUGAR-GIVING AND I CAnnot believe you had finished it so fast! You're amazing and an excellent writer, and I still feel so honored you took time to write this when you're still busy with your other stories, aaaah ;u;
Thank you thank you thank you so so much! I cannot find words to express my gratitude! QqQ/ *hugs*
azab chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I loved it a lot, it is sweet and cute and awesome
but shouldn't they be like not being able to move in sea water?
BluePhoenix0101 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
That was great! Aww... poor Ace... I can see why he would be worried about something like that. And the 'fight' was priceless. I could actually see it all happening in my head :)
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