| Reviews for Catch Me |
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Kikitiki chapter 12 . 5/24/2014 Neeeeehhhhhhh... I liked the beginning, but i think things got shaky the closer it got to the end. The adventure didn't last very long. |
AgentOhioS118 chapter 12 . 1/20/2014 I really liked that story! *squeal* It made me smile a lot, lol! :) Good job! |
Lizzy chapter 12 . 9/2/2013 Loved it! Could you please write more Blue excorsit fanfictions I love reading your story's |
starbringer101 chapter 12 . 7/20/2013 great job |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/20/2013 still loving it! |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/19/2013 luv it but... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!? 3 |
Purple flame chapter 10 . 7/15/2013 Izumo doesnt sound jealous just the change in plan...that all |
Kinue chapter 9 . 7/14/2013 Whoooooaaaaaa! Cliff hanger! Was Izumo, how you say...JEALOUS?! Haha, can't wait till your next update! -Hugs & Giggles, Kinue |
3HaH3 chapter 9 . 7/13/2013 hello, I like! the next chapter I will wait impatiently, please upload it as quickly as possible, I love this story, I was surprised and delighted, greetings and goodbye. ps: is my favorite story, sorry if misspelled, since no English. goodbye. |
Kinue chapter 8 . 7/7/2013 So cute I love it! -Hugs & Giggles, Kinue |
Kinue chapter 7 . 7/3/2013 Aaaaaaaaww! Too cute! I. Love. It! I can't wait for the next update! You're doing a great job with everything! -Hugs & Giggles, Kinue |
interconnected-dream chapter 2 . 6/28/2013 This far ahead I can certainly say that I like your style of writing and your mysterious OC is definitely intriguing. I'd love to know more about her past. Though I think it's a bit too fast in her development to already be making friends and getting so familiar with Rin- but that's just my opinion. I'm hoping that this character doesn't turn out to be a Mary Sue. She seems beautiful and kind but I feel like she has her secrets to hide as well. Keep going! |
Kangaroo-Review chapter 1 . 6/25/2013 Will it ever actually be explained as to why the "extras" are not there? After the entire campus was ravaged by demons and more students were exposed to temptaint, it only makes sense that new exorcists would be in the class. The first part felt rather out of place, story wise. Because that segment was so short and then had the divider after it, it made the story sort of... chunky, for lack of better word. Ah, and in a sentence like ""Everyone calls me Bon." He said Gruffly."", it should be ""Everyone calls me Bon," he said gruffly.". This mysterious OC, I hope she isn't a Mary Sue. She has the set-up for one, and you certainly have a nice writing style, so I just advise you to watch that when writing her. |