Hey!
I really liked this to be honest.
It was cute, bittersweet and thoughtful at the same time. I always found Luna in her own little bit weird way very smart, you showed it well.
["You're not scared for yourself, Neville." "That's why you're a Gryffindor, you know.]
I really liked this thought and I must admit I agree with you on this. What I really find great in your story that it held a lot of truth, it wasn’t just a pointless sappy one-shot...
Both Luna and Neville were really in-character in my opinion, Neville, trying to be strong, but failing and Luna being there for him at the right moment.
Niffly is a great house-elf name by the way!
I think it was great, you managed to use the prompts well and it wasn’t forced I must reassure you!
[He smiled at her, and if he could have, he would have spent the rest of eternity in that one, glowing moment.]
I’m always have problems with ending a story, I see you don’t. It was a perfect was to end it, you know.
One thing to say at last: Keep up the good work! (You are a good author, remember that!)

Alicia :)

Aww I loved this3

This was a pleasant and gentle moment between my favourite HP couple. I hope Neville realises that his 'Stupefy' spell could bring 7 years bad luck!