Ahhh please tell me there is a sequel or more chapters please please !

What a masterpiece. I applaud you on this; it was so well done! I hope you keep on writing, especially on this subject! I loved this story, really.

This was really wonderfully fun!

Very nice

UPDATE SOON PLEASE. This is a great story very sweet. By the way Lois always calls Clark "Smallville". You do have her call him "Farm Boy" which is another nickname she uses in the comics and tv shows

A very warm and romantic chapter. I'd like to read more. Please update soon. Pretty Pretty please. :D

I'm loving your story!

Aaaahhhhh...finally! That was beautiful & tasteful, and so perfect that they made love at Clark's home base, where he can truly be himself. Here's a tiny suggestion that you may want to incorporate into the story once Clark/Superman becomes more practiced at sex: being the super person that he is, physically, I believe that he doesn't need much time to recover between "love sessions," so maybe later on during a really hot scene, he can make love over & over & over within a short period of time, granted that Lois is able to handle it. ) Anyway, just a suggestion. I've always thought that if Clark/Superman has super-human abilities in every other area of life, then surely he's capable of "super-sex" - he just needs to learn how to fully embrace his amazing potential. That would be alot of fun! Keep up this story - I'm really enjoying it!

The wait was well worth it. I really enjoyed this chapter as well. Can't wait for the next one!

WOW... just WOW...! I can't express coherently in words, how happy I was to see this update in my inbox today. :D

And you totally did not disappoint, my dear. This was filled with poignant descriptions and a myriad of swirling emotions from start to finish. I loved the scenes with Lois and Martha. They were delightful, and I loved how you showed the two most important women in Clark's life bonding with each other. It was super sweet, and well-written. Nice! :)

I also loved how you had Clark fly Lois to his secret *nest* in the barn. That was super sweet, and very romantic. And that initial love scene between them was just beautiful, touching, emotional, and so worth the wait. You painted some vivid images with the words you used, and I have a serious case of the warm and fuzzies after reading that. *blushes* I love how they christened the *nest* as it were, to become their very own love nest. So, so sweet, and I can't wait to see how Clark figures things out, and moves to Metropolis to live and work beside Lois.

Looking forward to the morning after, and savoring the next chapter. :) Hope you update soon!

BRAVO!

Hugs,
Shani :)

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P.S. You did have a few typos in the story, but they were all minor things, and easily fixable. I will be happy to proof-read/beta for you, if you'd like. Just a suggestion... ;)

Hello Hestiaa,

This is proving to be a really beautiful story, a thought provoking and thoughtful exploration of the Lois and Clark relationship. My only criticism with this chapter is your grammar and spelling. It's fairly clear that you rushed to publication without a thorough proofreading. You don't need to do that. You're an excellent writer and should take the time to avoid the grammar and spelling errors that were in this chapter. Your story is well worth waiting for and we (the readers, if I may be so presumptuous) will not fault you for slower, but better chapters.

Thanks!

Shawn

Oh honey this chapter was so worth the wait. I nearly squealed with delight when I saw the e-mail notification at work this morning for the next chapter.

This chapter was so beautiful and a naturally believable progression of Lois and Clark's relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter

this is wonderful! can't wait for more!

Fantastic storyline! I wish they used this at the end of the film. Love the way you have Lois interact with Clark.
And your little errors (frizzes instead of freezes, in his shoulder instead of on his shoulder...) make your story even more likeable. I can imagine how hard it can be to write correctly, being a non-native English speaker myself. So congrats to you and I hope you share many more chapters with us.

Ahhhh! This is definitely my favorite Superman fic out there! You have an amazing writing style and I hope you update soon!