i am YELLINGGGG

Wow. Just wow. This was so incredibly beautiful. Heartbreakingly sad, but unbelievably beautiful.

I love this... it's so beautiful.

OH MY FECKING GOD THIS IS SO BRILLIANT I WANT TO CRY IT'S SO GOOD AHHHHH YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS IS THE BEST THING IVE EVER READ HOLY HECK.

I'm pretty sure I lost 90 percent of the water in my body because I cried so much. The story was beautiful.

I am absolutely blown away.

There's a different quality to this story- one that my mind cannot comprehend- and it's stunningly ethereal.

AWESOME.

This is incredibly well written. I can't even begin to say how much I enjoyed it.

May I just say that is is one of my favorite styles of writing and this was beautifully crafted

this is beautiful and haunting and i sort of want to sleep with it under my pillow

I read and favorited this awhile ago and decided to read it again. And I love everything about this. It's beautifully written, the imagery is thought-provoking and so very alluring. Well done, my dear.

Oh my god.
This is beautiful.
Dark and strange, but beautiful.
It's perfect, yet still I find myself wanting more.

Awesomely well written , thank you

That was beautiful- poetic and so confusing I had to read it five times before I could even hope to understand it but so very beautiful.

Liz

Completely freaky and poetic. I absolutely adore it. I'd love to see a glimpse of the future, just a glimpse, where Loki figures it out, and his reaction, but this is fine as is.