Cool! Cant wait for update!

I totally loved this chapter, even if I was expecting something else from this chapter I still loved it. You got the Gintama vibes going spectacularly here, kudos

I'm reading your story for the first time and I really like it. I love your creativity in telling Gintoki's story as Shiroyasha. Keep going!

NOOOO PLEASE DON'T END THIS STORY! I love it so much! ;A;
Gin: Please end it soon. I really want to take a shower.
Mirror: Shut up! I like watching you suffer!
Gin: ...Geez, you're almost as bad as that Shinsengumi sadist...
Mirror: I'll take that as a compliment. Now, if you don't SHUT YOUR FACE, then poor Sheep will get creeped out.
Gin: And that's my fault?
Mirror: Yes, actually. You're the one that decided to break the fourth wall in the first place. Now, go back to the story. You stink.
Gin: Hey, a lot of people think I'm really cool.
Mirror: No, you STINK. Like, peeyew! Take a shower!
Gin: I WOULD if you would let the story END.
Mirror: NOT THIS AGAIN! SHEEP PROBABLY THINKS I'M AN INSANE SADIST NOW!
Gin: That about sums up your life.
Mirror: ...Okay, that's it. I'm ending this conversation now. Go save that brat already.
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ANYWAYS, I really do love this story. It's adorable (to me, at least) and angsty and everything I look for in a story. :D

That boss' guess was spot on. xD

MORE PLEASE :(((( more action scenes and injuries stuffs...

Please update! This fic is great!

this is so goood!
i'm just passing by on this gin-chan universe so i didn't have that much knowledge regarding him, but your story are good enough that i thought it was cannon:D

please keep the good work!
hope to see more of mai, her taste in milk alone can rival gin-chan!

I like how you describe all character, oh yeah, maybe you can make some Gintoki's POV 'cause it would be nice to read it like that
anyway, thanks for all of your fanfic! it's wonderfull as always!

This story is so good! Please continue with it!

I absolutely love this story and am so happy another chapter is out! So Otose learned a bit more about Gintoki, I like that. What will happen next, I wonder, regardless of what you do I will forever love this beautiful story. Thank you so much for it all, and I look forward to the next chapter! Sadly, for now I must go to my pack, but I will definitely be back!

Hi! I recently stumbled across your (AMAZING) story again, reread it and finally decided to leave a review (I am a huge introvert and talking to other people makes me nervous ;;). Anyways, I can say that I really, really love your story! It's great! I think you've captured all of the character's personalities perfectly (and I also think Mai is really adorable, though I wonder just what she did to attract Amanto attention), and I can't wait for the next update :D Though I understand if it doesn't come for a while because your life seems really hard right now, and I hope it gets better soon!

Un super chapitre, il est vrai que cela fait longtemps mais j'attendrais toujours avec patience les nouvelles mises à jour. Le petit flash-back de Yamada sur son expérience de guerre avec Gintoki est incroyable!

Thank you for continuing this story! I hope your life is getting better!

I always think about why Gintoki has to wear white cloth. You made an interesting point there! It's like telling the enemy to focus on him.