| Reviews for Iron Girl |
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reallly chapter 1 . 5/30/2016 This story sounds pretty good, and I've read the first chapter. It's very well written and I like it. I'll have to admit I do like the superfamily. (Not gonna lie but Steve X Tony is adorable) And that's what I'm usually reading. So this is a change for me. I don't know why I just don't usually like the concept of Tony having a teenage daughter because every story out there it's always a daughter and never a son! (Which is why I usually like the Superfamily where Steve and Tony adopt Peter Parker) Trust me, it's very cute. But this story is good. And I will definitely continue reading it. Anyways, thanks for giving me something to read. Love it so far. Can't wait to start the next chapter! ~Miss Know-it-all |
JustSomeNerd chapter 5 . 5/23/2016 she is definitely tony's daughter lmao |
Guffeywrites chapter 10 . 11/26/2015 OH MY FREAKIN GOSH! THIS IS FREAKIN AMAZING!XDXDXDXDXDXD |
tammy henson chapter 9 . 7/28/2015 please please update soon |
SiobhanElizabeth chapter 8 . 9/5/2013 pleeeeeeasse update this soon! I love it! |
Clarity's Illusions chapter 8 . 8/10/2013 Great chapter! |
patty cake rocks chapter 8 . 8/9/2013 uh oh? |
moosenamedsam chapter 7 . 7/6/2013 Nicely written. I'm excited. :) The Avengers must show up randomly soon. Thor would be all "This is Tony's young Midgard?" And Steve would most likely just stare at her. *Just predicting* |
SmileandMoveOn chapter 6 . 7/4/2013 Why do I have a bad feeling about Luca? |
moosenamedsam chapter 6 . 7/4/2013 I absolutely adore this story. :D It makes me curious. But, I do have an idea for it. What if Bruce, and the others, show up at Tony's house unnanounced? And Claire answered the door.. Just a thought. :) |
SmileandMoveOn chapter 5 . 6/30/2013 Why do so many global disasters happen in the avengers realm? It's ridiculous. Imagine if all that happened in the real world. I don't even want to inagine how much more debt America would be in from being in a constant state if attack. On another hand, if Tony dies, I'm so going to kill him. |
Avengerlicious chapter 5 . 6/30/2013 Loved it! And Claire's mom has perfect timing by the way |
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 5 . 6/30/2013 great story so far, can't wait to read wat happens next, update soon plz : ) |
nargles lurk in the mistletoe chapter 4 . 6/25/2013 This is a very good story and I am thoroughly enjoying it, but there are a few points I want to discuss with you. First off, there are lots of unnecessary commas throughout the writing. For example: "'I heard you had a, situation.'" The comma has no purpose in that statement. Also, I think you ought to develop the character of Claire a little more. From what we've seen, we know she's nice and smart, but we haven't seen any flaws, and we don't know of any of her interests except Paramore. What does she do for fun? Does she like to read, draw, play sports... ? Be sure you give her some character flaws, too, or you'll be accused of creating a Mary Sue. |
nargles lurk in the mistletoe chapter 1 . 6/25/2013 This is good so far, but one problem... Tony lives in Malibu. |