Reviews for Our Forever
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Very good. Well written and easy to understand, just try to spread out the text a little.:) trust me,its hard, but when your reader sees a huge paragraph like this, their mind shuts off completely. Still,completely worth reading. Don't you just love tose tyler?
dragoncreators chapter 11 . 9/11/2013
GREAT! the fact the man-woman thing was switched was awesome too! great story!
Dixiechicksfan chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
This was beautiful! Thanks for writing this, it literally made my day! :)
I think you should continue their lives after the wedding, and add a little one. :)
Pink Lady410 chapter 11 . 8/18/2013
This is such a great story!
I hope there will be a sequel!
Epicfangirl10 chapter 12 . 8/17/2013
I also would love to read a sequel; this story was just so beautiful, I don't want it to end! :)
Lady-Fire01 chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
I liked this story and add baby sounds great. I have read ones where she doesn't go to the universe or because of Bad Wolf comes back. I only read stories where Rose and the Doctor are together. I wish they stayed and he married her instead of River. I have read rewrites of episodes with Martha and Donna with Rose added.
KatieAmyPond chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
I loved this story a lot, are you going to make a sequel? I'm like the Doctor, I hate endings :D
LadyHopeofGallifrey chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
continue it but make a sequal please!
totallyau chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
this story is fantastic can't believe I haven't read it before from start to finish rose's return her goodbye to her mum her now being a time lady her and the doctor now have forever and he proposed would love to read a sequel to this but so many story's where they have a daughter I'd like it if they had a son
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
i just loved this story i laughed so much just perfect
desimarf chapter 11 . 7/21/2013
I love it!Thank you for this beautiful story!Is my first story with the doctor and rose,i love them,and i was very sad with their final.
Epicfangirl10 chapter 11 . 7/14/2013
Wonderful story! I absolutely loved it...so glad The Doctor and Rose could finally have their forever :)
missjulseyb chapter 11 . 7/2/2013
OMG thank you so much for making a story where Rose becomes a Time Lord also and they can have their TRUE forever! I've seen so many stories with the half human doctor and it just didn't feel 100% right. This was wonderful. Thank you again for this amazing story. You are talented.
badwolf2603 chapter 11 . 6/30/2013
this is a fantastic story- be proud!
twilightismydrug chapter 11 . 6/28/2013
Very cute. You just might want to change a few things. "time lord" should be Time Lord, "mom" should be Mum and "french fries" should be chips. You gotta remember their British. Gotta get the little phrases and accents right.
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