This is so cute! I love the dynamic you've established between Holmes and Watson. Also, the tie-ins with "The Dying Detective" (one of my fave original stories) were much appreciated!

Great story! Everyone is very in-character. I love Lestrade's reaction.

Awww! Loved it! I like how you switched the original story around, by having John prove that actually he is good at acting/lying. Bravo!

Love it!

It's brilliant that John knows exactly what he's supposed to do with very little instruction and even when he thinks he doesn't. I like that he correctly identifies the risks, and that Sherlock knows all along that he will. And I LOVE the ending lines.

Well done, and thank you.

This one's good too. I like the relationship you've given them. Maybe it'd just be simpler if I just followed you as an author.

LOL!

I like your story! I especially like perplexed Lestrade ;)

Love the ending! Great work

i liked the last line of this! that was what he concentrating on... anyway.. i loved this fic! :)