So, this is a review for chapter 15, but the website only lets us leave one comment each chapter. Man, I had been waiting so long for this. I read this chapter when you put it out, but I can't remember if I received, but I'm gonna do it now anyway, lol. The style isn't much different, and I like the fact that you stopped the repetition. I love how you reimaged lines from the movies, those are my favourite lines and hearing from my favourite fanfiction pair makes me happy :)
I really wish you'd continue this and bring out the next chapter! As I've said before, I love Twilight and so I love reading the storyline with Bleach characters. So please, please, please write more!
You're doing so well and I love your writing, even if there were any inconsistencies it would still sound awesome. I know you can do it, so please don't stop when it's starting to get good!
I have no idea how many times I've read this story over the years, I think about 5 or 6, and I love just as much each time I read it. Please continue! :) 3

salut
comment ça vas pour vous?
je passe juste par là pour prendre des nouvelles.
1 an que vous n'avez rien publié, une pause provisoire, j'espère pouvoir reprendre la lecture très vite.
merci pour le temps passé et le partage de ta fic.

my dear hopefully thibgs are going well with you and yes this my second time reading this story... and hoping you will return and update with a new chapter. i already know things in life come at you when you at least expect it but others don't think like i do calling the author lazy and all that! if anyone says that to either ignore them or block them. but anyway love this story alot and i am patient. hope to see a new chapter from you soon. take care and much love.

Wanna moreee

thank you for sharing!)

merci, pour le nouveau chapitre
oui je suis toujours
j'attend la suite
à très vite

I really like your Story you are a Genius
But i would like ichigo and byakuya have earlier Sex than bella and Edward in the book
But till now you are absolutely one of my favourite writer and your Story is also really really brilliant
Greetings your faithful Fan
Konchichi

Hey love! So you've been checking out my work, and I really like to support the authors who support me, so I wanted to check out your story. :) Let's see. First off, I'd like to say I was a little skeptical going in to this. I'm not going to lie, I'm kind of a liteature snob and personally, I was never a fan of twilight or SM. Yet, I still wanted to see what kind of spin you'd put on the story. It's really well paced. I enjoy the fact that you do the same scenes from different perspectives and that this isn't just awkwardly speed up.

One of the other things I was skeptical about was Byakuya and Ichigo taking on the story of Bella and Edward because I just don't think ByaIchi is anything like the latter. For instance, Byakuya stalking Ichigo..eh...I don't know. I'm not one of those people who thinks that's cute. In fact, that was one of my biggest problems with twighlight. I thought Bella's and Edwards relationship was really unhealthy and over dramatic. None the less, for what the story is, I think you've done a pretty good job keeping the characters right. Ichigo is nothing like Bella, which is good because he's way too independent to be depending on anyone.

I LOVE the parking lot scene and Byakuya just fucking with Ichigo. Hooomahgawd, I thought that was so funny, and it felt like something Byakuya would totally do. I also love the scenes where their just like "EVERYBODY, QUICK, ACT HUMAN!" lol. I had a good laugh over that.

Despite not liking the stalking aspect, I have to admit, that phone sex scene was pretty hot. hahah. ;)

With Byakuya, in a lot of ways you've done his character well, however I do feel like you could refine him slightly. For instance, he's much more smug than I feel as you've depicted him and much more the suffer in silence type. He's also the type that would almost never curse.(Which he does a lot in this) It's just little things here and there that I would work on with him. Though, for Ichigo, he's pretty good.

As a fellow writer, I'd like to make the suggestion that maybe you should switch from this 1st person pov style to a 3rd person pov. With 3rd person, you write more like an omnipotent narrator, and that way, you can write from everyone's point of view in one scene instead of just one persons at a time. It's all about the style you like to write in, but personally, I thing 3rd pov gives you more power and freedom. Also, I don't know about you, but it's already hard enough for me to write dialogue in character, so a constant running narration always being 'in character' it's quite challenging.

The last thing I'm somewhat eh about in this story is the way Orihime is portrayed. There's this big problem in yaois where authors tend to put down females just because their girls. Now, in my story's I've depicted females in a not to positive light at times, but it's not because their girls. Orihime, cannonly, despite her crush on Ichigo, is the sweetest thing to grace this planet. Seriously, I've always felt like we don't deserve her. Sure, she loves Ichigo, but is that really a crime? Despite her own feelings, even when she was slightly jealous of Rukia, she beat herself up for that because she knew that wasn't fair. Basically, my point is, she's way to sweet to be as bitchy as you've depicted her.

I swear I'm not only full of complaints. lol I just like to give the good and the bad. I feel like that's what's the most helpful to the author at the end of the day. Overall, I think this is a good concept and I'm excited to see where you'll take it. Mostly, thank you for being one more loyal shipper because, seriously, ByaIchi needs way more love.

Aww.. & now to smutty scenes & sultry looks & sexual tension! Hope u update soon!
So glad i dint have to threaten to take away the story!

Somebody should draw Byakuya in this outfit...

Rangiku is such a jealous _
Yayayaya! Byakuya the hero! Woooook!

*blush* *droool* *blush*

Booo go away grimmjow.. ByaIchi forever!

Toshiro giving sexting lessons... XD

I love you so much for continuing this storyyyy

Byakuya & Ichigo sitting in the tree
K-I-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-I-N-G

Omg dirty dreams ichigo! *blush*