Not really a big deal, but why do you keep spelling "crap" with a "k?"

Psycho super angry girls that don't seem to want to what's going on, given that all they do is rant and rave without listening to anything the boys try to say. This makes very little sense and I won't be continuing past this confucsing and poorly designed chapter.

I like Crowley and Aziraphale's sort of hands off approach. To be honest, I was expecting some sort of meeting and trying to get the right people in the right dimensions, but this is better. More realistic. Very well done!
Poor Sam, I'm sure he's liking this being with the Campbells as a 'newbie' just as much as Dean did when he was brought back into the fold. I wonder how the book will turn out. Is it a spell? Do they need to find a witch? Will Sam be able to stop himself from putting his thoughts out there? And then there is Dean and Diana, going after the Leviathan doubles of Dean and Sam. Fun times.

I wondered how Good Omens was going to fit into this. I look forward to seeing what Crowley has planned. His "nudge."
And uh oh, Diana is about to find out more about this messed up world she's in! Time to deal with Leviathans.
Lol, Samantha is surprisingly like Dean. Not helping much in research and getting annoyed when the answer isn't there already.

omg, alternate universes! I wonder how everyone will deal with meeting the male and female versions of the Winchester siblings. Hmm, wonder why Diana introduced herself as a Campbell and not a Winchester. Ah well, that was several chapters ago. I look forward to seeing how things pan out and get corrected.

Is the other series going to come into play soon?

If they get the Bunker early, Kevin would have a safe place to decode the tablet. WHile ruby knows of the lucifer crypts, does she know that it contains a tablet?
IT is possible the bunker has info on purgatory at least. I totally see charlie and frank moving in, but if frank does not die, then how will they ever meet charlie, or encounter the tablet?
I always figured the men of letter, had found a tablet or some and did not realise what they were.

Poor Dean, everybody seems to like his girly-version better, lol. I hope Sam gets a chance to prove himself. Sucks to be the outsider in your own family.

Interesting

Lol! That's hilarious! Totally didn't see that coming! :D I don't think Dean would be too impressed with either of those fics, haha. Poor guy, like fanfiction doesn't creep him out enough, now he has Diana and Bobby reading it. And Bobby even reads Destiel. lol. Tho Diana's definitely interested in Cas - and I'm loving that. I liked that you went into Cas's crazy mind too - we didn't get any of that in the show. You've got all the characters in here - you even brought in Christian, Mark, and Gwen! And they get to be good guys on this side :) That's a nice change. Kinda crappy deal for Sam to be with both his parents and have them not really acknowledge him as theirs... that sucks for him. I'll be honest, I have no idea what's going on with Crowley but I'm guessing that will become more clear... Great story - and 'Uncle Bobby' is a nice touch!

Lol, Diana is a lot like Dean but Sammy is def different from Sam. I feel bad for Sam getting to see everyone he's lost, some of whom he never even knew, just to have to lose them again when he goes home. Then again, Dean is right - Sam has the better/safer/nicer gig.

There's Zira and Crowley!

Oh my God, I am loving this! I love the girls' version where everyone is still alive - it just makes it all that more horrifying how alone Sam and Dean are and how much loss they have gone through. I like that Dean is with his counterpart and Sam is with his (rather than Sam and Samantha switching). It's like having 2 Dean's, haha, they're gonna be driving each other crazy by the end of it.

Well, interesting start. I certainly would like to read more.