Hahaha I loved the ending sooo much plz write more soon I am a big fan of ur wrighting

lol I liked this! Roy really was trying, and I'm very glad for that. I read one story where he cheated on Ed, and Ed forgave him after one little apology, and I was like 'wtf?'
I'm really glad he was trying so hard and explained himself.

hehehe Loved that ending!

oh Mustang better pull some 5 star shit if he wants Ed back!

GO AL! Hell yes I loved that! 'WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?' *slap* omg I loved Al in this!

Yay for lemons! I love me a good sexy lemon ;)

oh Mustang, that didn't look good. Fuck how late it is, it's shitty to leave just cause of the phone call.

Poor Ed, Mustang is not that good at this, is he?

Awww, that was kinda cute. Ed was so nervous, and he keeps thinking about all the women Mustang's been with. That shit can mess someone's head up!

Oh oh oh! Ed never came home! That could mean a lot of things, but I'm hoping it means we get a dirty scene ;)

You still have some errors, but it's readable lol! Don't mind me, I'm a grammar-hound and spot mistakes without meaning to .

Oh, my Gate,
They've got a date!
Awkward or not,
This could get hot!

oh, Roy fucked up by being himself lol!

hehehe Roy backed himself into a corner when he said 'name anyone'

Oh, my what will Ed think?

(psst but Roy in the 3rd line did say 'Fuck I could get any girl I wanted)

Cute ending!

Omg! That was great! A mix of romance and comedy!
With Al and Roy phoning
"I was just about to call"
"...of course you were" I laughed so hard. And the ending was the fucking best! Plus it was a really sweet story. I can honestly say this is one of my favorite FMA fanfic! Thank you for such a great read!

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