Unless the author and Jetslinger here on Fanfiction are the same person or they have an agreement that isn't published, this is plagiarism.

Go to Jetslinger's Illegitimate Love, story id 3951585. You'll see that almost the entire plot is a carbon copy of that story. So many lines are the same or very similar. This story was published years after Illegitimate Love was completed.

This probably won't help anyone but I thought I ought to point it out.

RIP

Please take this down. This is the type of thing that will have readers not want to view your work. I understand that you have a life of your own, but this should have been put on hiatus until you get a chance to finish, or leave it up for adoption.

How it's this finished? What the hell? I don't even know where you were going with this. She miscarried so now they have to figure out what they have outside the baby? Did Sakura have anything to do with the miscarriage? Why I'd Shikamaru so over the top? I mean, i understand that they're like siblings and expected a brotherly that, but that was too much. Oooh!

Normally I don't care about giving a negative review, but this was half-hearted crap. Thanks for wasting my time.

That's not an ending, that's crap. Post a notice that you're story has no ending and spare readers from spending an hour reading your crap.

it was going good until the end. it felt like you were trying to end this story as fast as you could!

ignore my last comment

hmmm okay but i really liked the story already I hope this somewhat new directions isnt to jarring

the story was good up until the ending I mean... I liked it, it was something different that I honestly didn't see coming but this last chapter was very half arsed and I just don't feel like I got the closer you normally get when you finish a story

It's like you gave up the story and rushed to give all your readers the middle finger

Wish I had read the reviews first. Was expecting a nice story cause it flows really well and then bam. Pulls a fricken sopranos move. Regret wasting the two hours it took to read this.

This story fucked me up so bad, and I enjoyed every second of it, I hate that I love your open ended ending and love that I hate it. It's a dark story with brief glimpses of light but at the end of the day their world is dark and sometimes a difinitive end is just to easy or simple. The chance for you to delve deeper and continue is left open for you thanks to this ending and even if you don't it leaves the readers to wonder and decide the rest for themselves. Thank you for sharing this with us and even though I greatly enjoyed it...fuck you.

Keep it up,
Josh Macantosh.

Wow, that's it? It was good until the end.

Yes a update!? Keep them coming please. Little short but chant complain.