Yea. Really dark. :*(

Ohhh, that was good. Yes, I like this one. Very good. Very moving. Amazing work. Dark and tragic, but oh so right. Very Leo.

Take care and God bless! And I'll be waiting for more of your works (especially if they are Leo centric, because I love Leo).

-TheOne

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You made me cry... :'(
LEEEOOOO!BWWWWWAAAAAAHAHAHAHAH!
*coughs* okay! I'm done. :D

Dang. I really liked this. Your constant use of similes and metaphors and symbolism is amazing. The ending is a bit rushed, but it did make sense.

Thank you. This was a good story.

Shredder killed his family and now he has just avenged them before he killed himself.

:'(