Reviews for time's arrow
KittyKate2356 chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
gosh this was so good. I love your writing and I love the way you write GaleNiss.
Heslen chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Ahh I love this story so much
The Dark Enchantress Ruhi chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
This is wonderful!
Annoymous21 chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
never thought to ever read that Prim makes Katniss speechless.. haha
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2017
In tears loved it
AliceW chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Thank you for your story. I really like it.
Sunkenships chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
I am getting so attached to your stories, I hope you write more Galeniss!
Starsucks chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
this is seriously my favorite story so far
eternalLove59 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Amazing! I really enjoyed reading this!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Revisited. This is so detailed its incredible. Like their knees touching once they're pretty much made up, Prim's scarf... Seems like lots of time and thought went into this piece. Love this.
Redfox99
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
This is most definitely my favorite story of ever. It's just so perfectly in character and feels so real. I fully believe it could have happened like this had Prim not been reaped. There's also never a dull moment. And Katniss coming to this epiphany after a long struggle was exactly what she needed. I just love and miss your writing so much that I had to review this.
Neon-Night-Light chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
This was beautiful! I loved the steady pacing of this story, and how all the moments came together to make the happy ending I was worried we weren't going to get. Fantastic story and amazingly well written!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Love this story,
Brilliant portrayal of katniss and I love prims character development
:)
-c0ldplayl0ver
Pinklove21 chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
This is a beautiful story. I love your version of what could have happened had Katniss never gone to the Hunger Games, and there's not even a mention of Peeta. It's more realistic that way-he never would have said anything. I also love that Katniss came to terms with her love for Gale on her own.

Well done, just like everything you write :)
Nicole chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I'm finally writing reviews on your stories again. Feels like ages since I wrote on 'a perfect sonnet'. Still been reading your work, missed this out, though. It reawakened the love for Everthorne in me.

Honestly, I completely relate to the theme of this story. Its message is so real. It's crazy how everything passes and affects us in time.

Everything was perfect. No gaps. Well, it is your story so I'm usedto the style now. Oh, you have no idea, damn that Claire. Go for the Everdeens. I felt bliss at Prim and Rory's reunion but... It never did feel complete. I knew, a part of me did, that something bigger was coming up. Like, come on, we know happy endings, cliche; but you put us through hell to get to that. Just like life. Thanks for teaching.

I cried at Katniss going to the Hawthorne's. Of course. As she spoke to Rory, and he revealed all that, I just began sobbing. It came out of nowhere. For months, I've felt like I'm losing my feelings for all these ships/couples. And sometimes a little video would remind me otherwise (for another couple) like a simple nudge. But this effing story made me think back why I shipped them in the first place.

This is a MASTERPIECE. YOU are a masterpiece. I'm not even sure you'll see this but, thanks. For everything. For teaching the ways to handle things, hande LIFE. For keeping me inspired. Thank you. I love you and your work.
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