i love this!

please update soon...

I simply love your writing style! Keep it up. :) You have my support.

Great story! Very well put together...
You have considerable skill as a writer, not to mention, a lot of potential.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
In the meantime, ganbatte ne!

P.S. Have you ever thought of making a fluff story where Chrome is a guy? Heehee! _

Nice job, I loved the little plot twist you put in here, it is making the story even more enjoyable!
Simone

I like how you portray Chrome in this story. Please continue writing this story until the end with your best. I'm waiting for the next chapter patiently _

This chapter worth waiting! I'm happy that Chrome is not as pessimistic as she was in the manga. I wished that Amano would develop her character more, but the manga already end! The disappointment! Mukuro, you have to be more honest, you don't know when you or everyone else die, so be quick before it's too late or else you'll regret. And who's that man? Just what is his connection to Chrome and what does he want? The suspense...! Chrome, please be okay!

The only thing that angered me in this chapter is that scumbag M.M...I really want her to disappear! Amano, why did you created her in the first place?! In the final chapter cover, her picture was bigger than other Kokuyo Gang members even though she didn't appear often! Worse, she's beside Mukuro! Argh! Just thinking about her really pisses me off!

Sorry, I'm getting carried away. I'm sorry for every M.M fans out there who're reading this review by any chance. I really need to control my emotions. Update sooner please XD

Finally! I thought you've given up this story, thank goodness that I was wrong.

I laughed when Flan asked Chrome to give him a kiss! Now that I remembered about, I wonder did Chrome really gave him a kiss after the Representative Battle was over in the manga? I wish Akira Amano add that before ending the manga!

I'm happy that Chrome is stronger in this story. She did cry, but she's quick to regain her faith and spirit. Still, Mukuro, you better apologize to Chrome later...

The moment I read the word fedora, Reborn immediately appeared in my mind, but I highly this man is Reborn. Just who is he? What does he want from Chrome?!

I'm looking forward to read the next chapter :D

Bravo! Your story is really good and has so much potential, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Amazing story! This is sooo good already and its only the first chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter...please update soon :D

Nice description of characters, really unique storyline and please add more funny Flans :D xDDD LOL

Amazing...

This story seems interesting! Can't wait to see the future chapters!
It definitely fits the suspense genre and I'm hoping to see more 6996 romance! Keep up the good work!

Please update soon. I'm happy that there's still someone out there who publish 6996 fanfic. I hope you'll continue this story until the end. By the way, if I may ask, there mild violence, just how violent it will be? Please update soon :)

Yay! A new 6996 fic! It's been a very long time since the last time I saw someone updating/publishing 6996 fic! Please continue! Very please! GO 6996 FOREVER!

Nice start! I have a feeling this will be a great story! Please update as soon as you can! XD