| Reviews for Riven |
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   HardyGal chapter 12 . 9/25/2016 Amy and Rory's relationship gives me life. |
| HardyGal chapter 10 . 9/25/2016 Oh, Rory... )': |
| HardyGal chapter 9 . 9/25/2016 Oh gosh, I'm crying. I'm crying. I'm crying. That was awful and heartbreaking. (Well done!) |
| HardyGal chapter 8 . 9/25/2016 Oh dear... How dare they use Amy to get into Rory's mind?! That's just cruel! |
| HardyGal chapter 7 . 9/25/2016 Oh. OH. OH! MAN, I'm really slow to the uptake! Of course, his 2'000 years worth of memories, locked behind a door! But what on earth do the empaths want with Rory's memories? I loved the scene with Rory and baby Melody, even if it was only a dream. I'll admit, I started crying a bit. (Hey, Jack and Mickey. Like Martha, I know OF them, but I don't really know them. I also know absolutely nothing about Torchwood, and I haven't a clue who Gwen and Ianto are...) |
| HardyGal chapter 6 . 9/25/2016 Ow, my heart. It was clenching all throughout Rory's torture. Really, what on earth do they want with him? If they're empaths who like to break into peoples minds, then they probably most certainly have something to do with that door that Rory keeps dreaming about... But why don't they break the door open them- Oh. THAT'S what they're doing. They're trying to break Rory's resolve and make him open that door. But what's with the stupid door?! Poor Amy thinks that Rory isn't being tortured, but... Also, Jennifer. Sweet, poor Jennifer. :/ (Sorry, just remembering things). |
| HardyGal chapter 5 . 9/24/2016 Ok, something's weird about that door and I think it has something to do with these people. What on earth do these people want? They want Rory for something, but it doesn't seem to be information because they haven't asked him anything! And yet they hurt him too... |
| HardyGal chapter 4 . 9/24/2016 What is going ooooonnnnn? What's up with that door? Is it a metaphor for something? Martha, hrmm... I know OF Martha, but I don't actually know Martha. Unfortunately, due to the country I'm living in, I started watching DW starting with the Eleventh Doctor, so I know very little about the Ninth and Tenth Doctor era (a problem I plan to rectify). |
| HardyGal chapter 3 . 9/24/2016 "Rory himself, no offense, is not important enough to kidnap." I'll be honest, I kinda laughed at that line. So... These aliens don't want the Doctor? (A possibility that had been entering my mind). Then what do they want? (I've been asking that question a lot, haven't I?) Also, don't sell yourself short, Rory. You're the Doctor's friend just as much as Amy. |
| HardyGal chapter 2 . 9/24/2016 Oh dear, I feel sorry for that family :( Never-give-up Rory is best Rory, even if he fails. It was a little unclear what hit him, though. Did someone shoot him with a stun gun, or did the alien gun backfire on him, or what? And what do these guys want with Rory of all people? I mean, I'm definitely not one to sell Rory short - he's my favorite character, and really important - but it's not often someone wants to get their hands on Nurse Williams of Leadworth... |
| HardyGal chapter 1 . 9/24/2016 Yay, and fanfic focusing on Rory! I never find nearly enough of those, and this one is promising! Wonder what's gonna happen to our dear nurse. |
| Vicky Tzalachani chapter 17 . 7/27/2016 I love it! Please continue writing awesome things! |
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 17 . 12/8/2015 Yes, I loved how they saved the family :) Awesome last line too, like father like daughter |
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 16 . 12/8/2015 The kiss! Oh, what a brilliant solution, fantastic! |
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 15 . 12/8/2015 Great character analysis of Amy and how she would behave. |
