| Reviews for Riven |
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   ladybug114 chapter 13 . 10/30/2013 Poor Rory! He's struggling so much, i hope the doctor comes back quickly! |
| ladybug114 chapter 12 . 10/28/2013 Oh my gosh. Oh. My. Gosh. This... this is spectacular! Really well written, a tear-jerker for sure :'( POOR RORY! I want to give him a hug... but he would probably freak if i did that right now :P question- when he's shouting, is he thinking that he's back with the Pandorcia? Anyway, this is amazing, please continue it very very soon! |
| Abby chapter 12 . 10/18/2013 This is such a good story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please keep the chapters coming! |
| rainydaydreams chapter 12 . 10/15/2013 (((internal screaming OH NO RORYYYYYY))) (I always get so excited when I see an update for this story, I'm really loving it.) |
| AnitaHoward chapter 12 . 10/15/2013 Aaagh, I feel like crying. How will he ever be convinced that Amy is actually real and not just there to torment him? Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! |
| Kitty O chapter 12 . 10/14/2013 I like this chapter lots |
| AnitaHoward chapter 11 . 9/30/2013 Wow, you're a really good writer. I hope you update soon! I can't believe I missed this story until today. It's amazing, and sad, and tragic, and sweet; with really good villains (that are all dead. Yay!) and lots of Rory. |
| AnitaHoward chapter 10 . 9/30/2013 Good, I'm glad they're all dead, the beasts. But, oh, Rory, my heart is aching for him. |
| AnitaHoward chapter 9 . 9/30/2013 Wow. Just, wow. |
| AnitaHoward chapter 7 . 9/30/2013 So, are they after him because they think he's still a Nestene? I really want to smack that smile off of Ava's face. |
| AnitaHoward chapter 6 . 9/30/2013 Man, all I can say is, poor Rory! Well, OK, that's not all I can say :) It's awful that the Doctor and Amy think that Rory isn't being tortured, when all the while he IS. Also, his dreams are creepy. You're doing a really good job with this story. What is going on? Hurry up, Amy and Doctor! |
| AnitaHoward chapter 5 . 9/30/2013 Wow, poor Rory! I always thought that Rory possibly wasn't jealous enough in regards to Amy and the Doctor. He had a lot of reason to be jealous, but he almost always handled himself like a gentleman. This Ava is really creepy. I wonder: what IS she after? |
| AnitaHoward chapter 4 . 9/30/2013 'Again they did not merit him with a response.' This doesn't sound right. It would be better as 'Again they did not condescend to respond.' Other than that, it's so nice to find one of the rare stories on that actually uses proper grammar and spelling. Can I just say, "Thank you" ? :D I'm very much enjoying this story. I loved this: "Mr. Williams, I never thought you were a talkative man, but you're beginning to prove me wrong. A little holding of the tongue would not be amiss." I like that Rory tries to fight back and escape, that he's not all passive and stuff. He's the Last Centurion, after all! Go Rory! Also, I like that Martha showed up :D She's not my favorite, but I like her. |
| AnitaHoward chapter 3 . 9/30/2013 Rory for the win! I'm loving this story! |
| AnitaHoward chapter 2 . 9/30/2013 Haha! "I hate yellow." I can't believe those aliens killed the family! O.o Well, OK, I can, but you just made me hate them utterly. Come on, Amy and Doctor! |
