Your writing is magnificent!
The story flows so well, and everything contained in it seems so plausible. To be honest, this has to be one of the best fan stories I have ever read. Thank you so much for posting it.

Cool. I have a story for her too. From her words I'm guessing she lost someone (or more then one) and blamed herself. I then thought she probably a child. I'm also thinking of doing a story of what happens after Jerry said "save my life" (I'm debating between having them get together or just remain friends.)

It is so...finished! The end is great. I really like Jerry and hoped there could be some romance,but that would be too cheezy, wouldn't it?

Lovely, just lovely. You should write more, this really is brilliant. :)

and so it lives on, in loving memory of Trevor mcKinney.