CMON DONT TELL ME ITS DONE i want more i need more
its soooooooooo gooooooood im a die hard fan of urs dude c'mon i need
more artorias ornstien ciaran and gough plz man dont end it u have so much potential

hay i love the story is it over i ope not u have a lot of openings where u can make a new chapter... so could u make more i am addicted and i really want to see where this is gunna go

thanks.

-LugerMK2

This story was a great story it touched me deeply plz don't stop here u can continue to at least another 10 chapters plz man c'mon I'm upset that it's done...
for now...
maybe...
plz

me gusta tu historia y disfruto leyéndola, continuala y un consejo que te doy es que trataras de darle un poco mas de seriedad a los personajes

I adore this entire story. Excellent storytelling!

Lol

I don't know if I can go one reading... I never played Dark Souls 1 (completely Dark Souls 3 now) So I have no idea what's going to happen next except some vague info on the the end result.

But I can feel it in Artorias' voice... everything is going to be torn asunder.

Hey EScraper, I'm a long time fan of this masterpiece you've written, it has enthralled me, made me damn near cry, certainly made me laugh, and has just made my Souls experience greater. You give the 4 knights personalities that are relatable and it makes the story even greater and more fun to follow.

The way you write is wonderful, you give the imagination plenty to work with and that turns this story into more than just words, it turns it Into a performance, a work of art to be enjoyed both mentally and physically by everyone. Keep up the awesome Work!

Great but...I kinda really wanted a happy ending of ArtoriasxCiaran.

I enjoyed this fanfic. I like your portrayal of the Four Knights.

Chapter 13 though. You had to imply they had sex. It was kinds vague. And...Ornstein's a perv

OK what's next?

Holy shit, was that Velka in the last scene? I need moar now damnit Scraper :(

Great stuff really looking forward to the next chapter, i am wondering how this will end will because i half expected this to end with the others arriving to find a corrupted Artorias just like in the DLC with a mangled left arm and feral attacks and he takes on his family completely lost to manus corruption only ending with a brutal battle where Ornstein regrettable delivers the finishing blow killing the wolf knight. well just how i'd imagine it going but i like this happy ending too

It has been a bit since I have read a fanfic that I have enjoyed so much, that my heart and soul were in true love with it. You have a made such a beautiful story here, that it has given me a new inspiration to play Dark Souls 3 again. The character development is evenly spread out to compliment the scenerys and situations amazingly. You have even give life to characters that I felt had not a sliver of emotion to them.

Keep up the great work, PRAISE THE SUN! \o/, and safe travels, Champion of Ash!

have you forgotten that artorias has a shield?