| Reviews for Where The Pieces Fall |
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   True Love Lives Forever chapter 3 . 8/21/2013 Very sweet story. I loved the conversation between Peter and Neal, Peter's worries that the system failed him or vice versa, and how Peter figured he needed to make up for lost time with El. Thanks. |
| Wondo chapter 3 . 5/28/2013 "I don't want to be this kind of guy, too preoccupied by his job to look after his wife. You shouldn't have to hide your fears, and I should not ignore them. I always talk about doing the right thing and all, but the first and most important thing to do should be to take care of you." Aww ... beautiful ending chapter. This is the Peter Burke we know and love. Thanks! |
| wotumba1 chapter 3 . 5/28/2013 good story! |
| wotumba1 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013 glad that has been resolved like this... |
| pechika chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 beautiful story with great dialogue. looking fwd to yur next fic. |
| Wondo chapter 2 . 5/27/2013 Excellent conversation between Neal and Peter. Peter's unease and apprehension about his actions rang so true. Will we see a change in his attitude this upcoming season? More determined to return to working within the system? Great chapter! |
| last1stnding chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 Very happy you ended with Peter and Elizabeth. El has kind of been the forgotten victim in all of this and Peter certainly needed to make amends there. A very touching ending to the story - and the last line fits Peter so perfectly! |
| HighOnAWindyHill chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 Aww totally cute! Peter and El33 Wish it wasn't over though:( Really enjoyed this! :) |
| peppe1951 chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 That was the perfect ending...great story. I hope you will write another. |
| pechika chapter 2 . 5/27/2013 Wow this is perfect, loved the Peter and Neal conversation |
| HighOnAWindyHill chapter 2 . 5/26/2013 Aww so so sweet3 Really enjoyed this! Excited for more. Hope Mozzie brought that ice cream :D |
| Wondo chapter 1 . 5/26/2013 Another story from Aragarna. Wonderful! I'm relieved you let us see Peter's emotional turmoil. So many writers quickly dismiss his precarious didn't gloss over the pain and humiliation Peter felt with his arrest. Great chapter. |
| Mixky chapter 2 . 5/26/2013 It's simply heartbroken for both of them. I love Neal and Peter, they are amazing alone and together. I mean they are family each other. They are friends, colleagues. And you're damn great to made them in bones and blood. They are themselves. Simply. And i know it's far from simply to do it right. Thanks a lot for this story and for your kind answer. I can't wait for the next. Miky |
| last1stnding chapter 2 . 5/26/2013 I loved this exchange between Peter and Neal from the very first time I read it. Both guys are perfectly in character and a talk like this really needs to happen. Well done. |
| ansel chapter 2 . 5/26/2013 Wonderful way to start my day! |
