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You should update this. It's pretty good, and I've been looking for a good book that shows Mandalorian culture in a good light for a while.
If you post more I will be very happy :)

I love the cast of characters so far. The tension in the plot is great but killing me slowly at the same time. Can't wait until your next update, whenever that may be!

-sofi

This actually made a lot of sense on why they're not outright fighting. Some people might think that's the coward's way, but it isn't. They're not stupid, and they don't want to be wiped out, so what they're doing is really the only choice open to them at the moment.
Looking forward to more!

It's good to have you back, definitely missed you around here. Congrats on the degree, it's awesome to have that under your belt. I love how Shadow and Keira are testing each other, trying to understand the other. The way you right it is both tactical and playful, making for an entertaining read.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

So, this story is finally getting there, yes, looking forward to running into those Mandalorians.

Briefings *are* hard! I feel your pain! You made this one look easy, though. I thought both Obi and Plo were very in-character, and blended seamlessly within your story. So! Now our intrepid heroes have a mission. I'm excited to see how everything shakes out. :)

Great job slowly developing the attraction between Shadow and Kiera. So far it's mostly Shadow *noticing* her, which is perfect; no need to rush these things!

I'm enjoying all of your OCs, particularly how Kiera's fiery Corellian nature is balanced by an impressive level of self-awareness - even for a Jedi. She does have a lot to learn, though, and I'm excited to watch her character develop.

Loved the sparring scene at the end! :)

Congrats on your Associate's degree, and best of luck on your applications! Living away from the parents is pretty awesome, too. ;)

Oh! If you want a good naming resource, look up "scrabble word lists" and go to town. I've found a *ton* of cool names/words that way.

Great chapter! Looking forward to more. :)

Congratulations on your psychology associateship (is that the right word?) and also well done on this chapter, a) for getting it out with all your real life stuff going on and b) for writing such an intense / character driven work. Lovely, keep going with this :-)

Woo hoo! Wow. Loved this. The characters, the squad, and the interactions. It was all a great deal of fun and I look forward to reading a great deal more. Nice job getting it all done and pulling it all together. I can see why it was a great deal of work since there is a lot going on between your Jedi main character and your clone main character. But, so much potential here for a very full storyline.

Hello,
When are you planning on releasing more chapters?
Love the stories and I hope this feedback gets put to use.
Thanks,
Spartan

Aww dammit now I have to wait for the next chapter :D

Don't leave it too long :)

I am enjoying your style or writing, and I like Kiera already! Good description in your words. Give me more!

Yay! So glad to see an update from you. :D

Lots going on here! I enjoyed seeing Kiera during the interrogation, especially her perceptions of Saresh in the Force. The dressing-down was very well-done as well, and I *loved* Jatne's talk with his wife. It's also interesting to see a "civilian," perspective (ie: not a clone or Jedi) on the clones.

Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

thanks for this it's awesome.
I do wonder who the mystery women, Captain Ari likes.

The content of this chapter allows me to forgive you for taking so long. RL is a pain in the neck we all with we could avoid. Just do me a favor and don't wait another year for the next update. :)