Reviews for I Could Just
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I love this. xo
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
That was so heartfelt! Great job :)
Sue1313 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
This was really good. I could see Reid feeling and thinking about Maeve and her talking to him.
omgnotagain chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
nice!
Titi25 chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
"Love, Spencer. What do you think brought her back for you?"... Speechless... This one was perfect!
Sara Sidle Grissom chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Amazing recap of the episode, loved Reid's conversation with Maeve. The ending was great, love bringing JJ back to him.
PopReader chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Great one shot. Love the part when you described the effects of Strauss' death for each member of the team.
And I'm with Daisyangel. I'm waiting for your next story in Soundings universe. I love Transitions. But I miss The Reids. Henry and Rosie. And Casey!
Annber03 chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Nice one-off about last night's show. I loved the part about how her death affected the team members individually, particularly Alex and the whole "unfinished business" thing.

I thought the bit in the episode where Rossi came in to find the bottles all over the floor of Erin's room was particularly poignant and heartbreaking. I figured, along with Rossi, that it was the Replicator's doing (and what a cruel thing to do), but still, there were moments I did wonder... So I like that you touched on that scene a bit.

And then of course, the whole inner dialogue between Reid and Maeve-I knew he'd make the right choice and yet that ending still had some suspense to it (in regards to JJ-I also noticed a moment during the show, think it was when Rossi was walking to his office after Erin died, when JJ looked like she was going to move forward to say or do something, and Reid caught her elbow slightly and urged her back. I don't know why, but that struck me kind of interesting. I think your stories about those two have infiltrated my brain :D). I thought it was a nice touch the way they wound up using the word "zugzwang" against the Replicator in the end of the episode-a way of taking back the painful memories and situations associated with that word, or something.

Again, great take on the finale.
Kathryn Claire O'Connor chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
This is an awesome one-shot!:)
Daisyangel chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
An excellent story and what a finale. Do you plan to write any more stories in the "soundings" universe. The one where Will dies while under cover and JJ and Reid are raising Henry?
sugarhigh9394 chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
My JJ/Reid feels!
Nice job :)
I have to say, I wasn't very happy with how the season enced...
songwriterforlife99 chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
**crying**

THAT. WAS. PERFECT.

Wow, I can't even...wow. Just PERFECT. Every single detail you worked in. That finale last night was so intense, and you created the perfect little one shot from it. Still can't believe Strauss is dead. Aaaanyways, love Hotch interpreting the thoughts of the team. He got every one right on. MY POOR BABY REID. Once again descending into darkness. **crying** And then his little conversation in the helicopter OH GOSH. Telling himself he wanted to die just tore me apart. AND THEN MAEVE MAEVE MAEVE. MAEVE. "Not without you!" "Are you without me?" **crying** And then oh our sharp JJ. Of course she can tell something's off. Of course she can tell he'd recovered too quickly. Of course. And she's right. AND THEN HE WAS PRAYING. AND THEN TALKING TO MAEVE. AND SAYING EVERYONE BUT HIM. HE LOST THAT PRIVILEGE WHEN HE LOST HER. **crying** AND THEN HIM THINKING ABOUT HOW EASY IT COULD BE. THAT'S WHEN IT HIT ME THE HARDEST. AND THEN JJ COMING AND TELLING HIM MAEVE WOULDN'T WANT THIS. DO IT FOR HENRY. "LOVE, SPENCER. WHAT DO YOU THINK BROUGHT HER BACK FOR YOU?" **sobbing**

Overall...perfect. Beautifully perfect. Now off to Transitions so I can hopefully beat the heck out of Will. :)
-Song