I've already read this story several times and let me tell you - thus is so far the best reimagining of Rosario Vampire story. For your first fanfic, you nailed it incredibly well.
Kurai is such an engaging character. Even when he's acting a bit like a brooding grump, he does have a good reason to.
His relationships with the canon characters is very interesting. And his love interest Kiria also has an adorable personality.
Once again, very good aproach on a recreated story. Easily one of my favorites.

Fun fact: there is a canon charcter named Kiria in Rosario Vampire manga as a member of the organization Fairy Tale.

Not gonna lie last chapter gave me some feels. You should be proud i have never actually shed a tear when reading fanfictions and i read alot of sad ones but you actually got me to shed a few! Anyway great story it was awsome cant wait to read the sequel

Sincerly- that one guy

Hey im way late for this but why not use a girl from another anime like monster museme? Musume i dont know how to spell it but i figured even if i was late it could be a good idea for a different but similar story anyway great story so far! Ive been having fun reading it so thanks for making it :)

Sincerely-that one guy

Did you base this off the original teen titans show? So much of this corresponds to raven. Portal into mind, defeating evil personality, demon father, hates birthdays, etc

I can imgaine that Kurai and Levy both died with smiles, tears in their eyes. I know I did, I cried at this. I generally hate OCs but this one for some reason made me cry. He had nothing to live for other than himself and he was simply scared of everything. He didn't know how to hand anything and responded the way he did by sounding tough when in fact he was afraid.
R.I.P Kurai and Levy

I would normally be able to read this, but as I do know some japanese... Kurai Kage (Dark Shadow)... really? I know nothing about whether or not your story is good, but that name... ugh.

Basket Ball Soul Eater

When did Kuroshitsuji (Black Butler) Get here?

Harem plz

The mind fuck is real

Who the hell is jake and ben?

Amazing ending thought you would give Tsukune dragon slayer magic

This is a cool story, So far so good. Aside from typos here and there. But who am I to judge I love the story and the direction its headed. Do you know what would be an awesome monster to add here? A Samsquanch.

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Could've added more pazazz.