Reviews for What Could Have Been
Allstarall chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
I really really liked it. Dearest Sumia.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2018
Great story!
pkmn2112 chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
I actually really enjoyed that twist with Sumia sharing the pie with Robin. Sum can actually support with Sully as well and I enjoyed them. But yeah, great little short, I especially appreciated that little bit at the end where Male Robin married Sumia, that brought on all the good feels!
Dark Durian chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
A very nice one-shot, I definitely liked the friendship between Sumia and FemRobin.
dreddman chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
damn.
CuteCat213 chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
I really, REALLY liked this. And I loved how you managed to make Sumia a good friend instead of demonizing her like some do or how others completely disregard her feelings for Chrom. I have a request I was hoping to ask you about, since you're the only person I've found so far who has the Sumia\Cordelia\FeMU friendship thing.

I was wondering if you might be open to doing a Chrom\Olivia one shot, where Sumia, Robin, and Cordelia all admit their love for him to each other only to watch him get stolen away by Olivia, and form an even closer friendship trio (or more, I don't mind either). It may just seem especially so to me since I always end my FeMU as a Dark Flier...
Hiruma Musouka chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
I wanted to say how much I really liked this. I liked the idea of different group meeting their double where other possibilities had happened. I also really liked the interaction between Sumia and Robin and how their friendship is shown here. Sumia is also written very well and I like that she decides that she's going to behave like the person she wants to be rather than listen to what she wants for herself. I really admire that and I think it's a great example of what more females should aspire to.
When the Moon Met the Sun chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Aw, I love the concept for this fic! I do think that Sumia really got pushed to the wayside as far as character development in awakening, and I wish they'd given her more than, like, 3 supports. She had so much potential starting off and when she was first recruited and it made you think she'd be integral to the story, but then she's portrayed as a kind of an air head, which is a huge disservice to her.

Ah, well, sorry to rant, but overall I truly enjoyed the robin/Sumia friendship goodness.
BlackLadyCharon chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
A very gorgeous story, and so see-able. I like Sumia, she's sweet and ditzy, but it really feels to me in-game that Chrom settled for companionship there. Then again there are many forms of love, so it is plausible. But I love how he and the female Avatar work together, and honestly if I could I'd make a little homemade glitch so that Chrom could get the guy version of Robin too.
A-to-Q chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
It was a really cool idea to make use of StreetPass as an idea for a story!

And you have a really good talent for writing; not too much content in one part, and you can portray the characters well, so I do hope that you continue writing stories! Also, I was wondering if you would ever consider making a one-shot story about the Hubba Tester? It seems like an interesting and funny idea that you could possibly work with after I read this fic of yours.
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
I never hated Sumia nor did I like her, but with this story you had me appreciate her. So kudos to you ;)

Oh, just wondering something, basing on Lucina's personality does she REALLY seem like the children of the OTHER women candidates? She acts so smart, so matur,e so...SMART! (she doesn't act like Chrom too much .)

Lets list off the Female Candids for Chrom.

Maribelle as mama?...nope.
Sully? HELL NO.
Olivia? Maybe, not I don't get that feeling...
Sumia...maybe? no...maybe?...NOPE.

And then comes the Female avatar...am I the only who thinks that Lucina might be Robin's canon daughter and it MAKES SENSE?!
Deader than the Doornail chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
A very sweet story; I like how you described Sumia's thought process. I married Chrom on my Female Robin file and Sumia on my Male; and let me tell you, the later's Morgan is UNBELIEVABLY POWERFUL! Haha!
Lady Mai-Mai chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
OH. MY. NAGA. I'm so glad I wasn't the only person who thought like this! This... My feels... I always felt bad for not liking the canon pairing but ... I don't even know what to say! This brought me comfort. w thank you for writing this.
Kurosu chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
lol, this is an interesting take. sumia had always annoyed me, and the firs two times i played, i always stuck chrom with robin! sumia's head is always in the cloud, and i never thought she was ever a good match for chrom. oh well. i enjoyed your story! -kuro
Roamingbug chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This is so...I don't know! argh Love it!
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