| Reviews for Spoiled Rotten |
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HybridAlabaster chapter 2 . 11/27/2016 Love the idea hope you keep updating |
NotAnActiveAccountAnymore69 chapter 2 . 9/8/2016 Let's see where you take this story, I'm very intrigued. |
creativesm75 chapter 3 . 1/15/2014 oh my... interesting. |
Goddess of Bunnies chapter 3 . 8/12/2013 Please update.I really really love this story so please please please please update,I beg you. |
i-didnt-lose-sammys-shoe chapter 3 . 5/13/2013 Awesome work on the chapter! :) |
Technical Technicalities chapter 3 . 5/12/2013 Well, suddenly, I don't feel bad for Father anymore, but more for those Delightful Brats. |
Technical Technicalities chapter 2 . 5/12/2013 Perfect? I think not. |
Technical Technicalities chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 Oh no, poor Benedict! Stupid Grandfather |
DelightfulChild chapter 3 . 5/12/2013 Oh my gosh yes yes! I loveeee this concept! Hardly anyone ever focuses on Father and the Delightfuls family relationship so this is a real treat! I'm excited to see more of this! |
Kitchan chapter 2 . 5/11/2013 I loved this concept but it needs a better structure, The second chapter confuses me because I know who father is but you are stating Sector V is Monty's team well Benedict was younger than Monty. I feel you need something there. But again its really good I really like just needs better structure and some additional support. |
i-didnt-lose-sammys-shoe chapter 2 . 5/10/2013 Awesome work! Please update soon! :) |
Panthalassa Blue chapter 2 . 5/10/2013 This is great! I love Father-centric fics, and being written so well, this one takes the cake! ;) |
Numbuh Phenon chapter 2 . 5/9/2013 Well, this is all kinds of excellent. Father's motivations and ambitions are just so spot on here, and it'll fun to see how that shapes his relationship with the Delightfuls. I love where this is going. |
drax4 chapter 2 . 5/9/2013 It would be interesting to see father talk about the times the delightful children have disobeyed him. Like when they were going to disintegrate Nigel when Father said no |
Marty522 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013 Some villains start out with such great intentions... it's really a shame how Ben turns out. Good start, I look forward to seeing where this goes! |