I really enjoyed this, you have a real talent for writing these two. Thank you!

Love Oliver's puppy dog eyes. He could totally pull that off. Realistic scenario here. Very well done.

I really loved reading this! It was perfectly in character and so well written. I'd love to read the other story, but couldn't find it. What's the title?

Looooove it

I loved this!

Aww, so beautiful and bittersweet! I love the deep and touching moment that Oliver and Felicity have. I hope you'll write one of them actually being together after Oliver had dealt with his demons.

Aww! Oliver is so sweet and caring! I hope that he'll be taking that next step soon

Love it! It'd be so cool if you did a continuation of this.

Loved it! Bittersweet, but still left with the oh so lovely potential of the future relationship. You captured the characters beautifully! Keep up the great work!

No, so close! But I guess I can see why Oliver doesn't want to get with Felicity just yet. Can't wait for the next story! ;D
MS07

That was awesome, a lovely fluffy story, well written with great chemistry. Look forward to more olicity fics from you, great job.

Awesome

Oh my God, your story is so sweet and I'm in love with it. they are so cute and beautiful together that make me so tenderly.

This was...sweet. Not in a sugary, over-the-top sort of sweet, but the gentle, kind sort of sweet that leaves them both vulnerable yet ready for the next step. You've done something few authors ever do with these two: you created a plausible, reasonable, beautiful way for them to be together.

Or rather, eventually be together.

Which is something else I was quite pleased to read. You kept Oliver as Oliver, giving him the same doubts we would expect to see from him with any woman in his life, though now that he has taken the first step toward truly opening up, he's even more worried that he might cause her pain. There is sadness, and hope at the end, mixed together for him in what must be a painful state to be in, but since there is hope, he has a reason to /want/ to continue breaking down his walls. You've written Oliver as a caring, kind man with more than just sex on his mind, and for that I am eternally grateful.

And you kept Felicity as she really is, not just a babbling blonde, but a smart, mature woman who knows what she wants, and has the patience to wait for it.

I hope to read more from you soon.

-Orisoun

Awesome job! Loved it. Just wish the show would do this...