i know you gave a warningabot the past being difrent but all of the cherecters are just to ooc for me

Even if he's a kid, to tell the person who took care of him to shutup and that she never loved him? Especially after that last explanation she gave before he told her to shutup, it's kinda out there.

1. It's not that you have bad English grammar. Look at Alpha s Omega, he/she is horrible at translating. It's an annoyance, but overlookable.

2. No this story is not: grim, gory, and/or M rating. When I said "dark" I meant, not many people will like it, me being included.

4. Yeah, you should continue this, but get a damn beta already. Betas have a big "B" on the profile page and there are more than enough to help you. All you have to do is translate it and send it to them for prood reading first before posting. Spread your content across as many languages as possible, good luck.

please continue this story it is very interesting

go ahead

No, you went from decent and manageable story to a bad idea. Whether he was one of them or not, they still were his family. I don't see why he would act so harshly in the first place. Your way of incorporating Naruto characters are weird, how'd they get there anyways? Your chapters are far too short most of the time too.

This is just an awkward story to read, you took a lesser traveled path and went even further into the dark with the most recent decision... I've always been a supporter of this fan-fiction, but this is just too far off for me to continue supporting, good bye.

Horrible grammar...it makes reading, understanding and visualizing incredibly hard. Get a beta. Why do you need angst in this story?

Okay, this was an interesting story. I like to read another chapter of this when things are better. I hope you can make it. Good luck and stuff. I liked this story.

If naruto goes to the academy pair him with mizore

boring

Now I'm sad...

OMFG, the Sasuke arc is taking so damn long!

This probably sucks, but I skipped just about most of this chapter...

Aw yeah, the Sasuke and Naruto rivalry is on it's way! It would be rather cool if it turned out they were transported into the future, with the time of the elemental nations being long passed, before Akasha and Issan, with Naruto and Sasuke being the last remnants of their world...

DAMN YOU! WE WAN'T KURAMA/FOUR TAILED NARUTO!