Maybe get a beta reader.

please continue this story and update soon!

Thailand was an Axis Power never forget

Also this is the Suicide Squad of fanfictions

BTWs
The prophecies are all supposed to rhyme
Example,
seven half bloods shall answer the call,
to storm or fire the world must fall.
an oath to keep with a final breath,
and foes bear arms to the doors of death

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"So where are you come from?"

should be 'so where are you from?' or 'so where do you come from?'

Amphitrite's answer "Greek"

should be 'Greece'. She comes from Greece and is Greek. There is a difference.

"Your name doesn't sound like a Greek name at all"

Wth, it IS a Greek name. Unless Mat is an idiot who just doesn't know then that's fine.

"eyes sparkle with intelligent"

should be 'eyes sparkle with intelligence' Intelligence not intelligent.

The first chapter is where you should make a good impression for the rest of your story after the summary. But it is riddled with grammatical mistakes. Not flaming or hating, just giving you constructive criticism.

The 1968 Leonard Whiting and Olivia Hussey version of Romeo and Juliet?

I absolutely love how this story is going!
When's the next update?
JasonxPearl forever. It was a little cliche a tiny bit fast and forceful but other than that it was good.

having Kronos's POV might be interesting then you could move to Luke POV

Luke and how he has to share his body and how He is trying to get the control and Pearl

Not to be rude or anything I personally don't .a twilight crossover

I don't want Luke to be evil.

Nice plot line and characters. But grammar is just ugh, also prophecy isn't that good

Is Luke still gonna die? Will Jason and Piper still have their moments? Can we see Pearl just snap from the stress and unleash her powers. Kind of like Aang from AtLA.

#TeamJason