| Reviews for The Better Claim |
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Jen4850 chapter 1 . 11/1/2013 Perfect |
Jane Q. Doe chapter 1 . 5/11/2013 You're just so spot on in expanding with wonderful fic little moments in the show that I wonder about as well. I loved the morgue scene (especially the way Lucy Liu's voice drops on her second "No!" to him), and I hope how you wrote it above is really what the writers were intending. Because it just makes sense how you've laid it out, what Watson would be thinking the first time she holds a scalpel after leaving the medical field. I really look forward to your work, please keep it up! :) |
NotesfromaClassroom chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 Oh, so lovely! So many delicious turns of phrase and wording. Every carefully constructed part of this: "Finally, she acknowledged the small chance he was using the lessons she had brought to him, to get her to face her demons and process the psychological damage she kept under close guard. Well, she'd been trained in evasion tactics too. Right now, it didn't matter what his reason for fumbling was. She didn't know if he was purposefully setting himself up to cut off his thumb or not, but either way, she'd have to deal with it if it happened, and no. She was not ready to handle living flesh at knife's edge again. Grappling an arm to be reset in its socket was one thing; repairing a severed finger or artery was another." Wonderful writing. Thank you for the pleasure. |
marshmallowdeviant chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 I loved this scene and I love your exploration of it. Especially her thought process and your conclusion at the end that these days she knew she could do what she wanted! Makes such sense. She is learning to follow her own lead and Sherlock is helping her. He was such a scamp in this scene being deliberately careless. But i think he was right :) ugh! Great stuff. Never stop :D x (also lovely R. Frost reference) |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013 Very nice introspection! Loved the show of character. Keep at it. |